"A Beginning, of Sorts" - A Gift for admiral_sab

Jul 27, 2009 09:03

Title: A Beginning, of Sorts
Author: troublems03
Gift For: admiral_sab
Summary: Rose learns it is possible to know of someone for years without really knowing them at all.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 2583
Author's Note: Infinite thanks to silveredaccents for beta-ing this for me, it is truly appreciated. admiral_sab, I may have played somewhat fast and loose with the prompts that you ( Read more... )

author:troublems03, round two, fic, rating:pg

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bambu345 July 27 2009, 15:07:04 UTC
There's something so very cheerful about this piece. It's so very nice to see that the war had positive and lasting repercussions, enough that these two can indulge in their preference for one another without any real fear.

Their families' reactions will be quite a scene to behold, I'd imagine.

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drcjsnider July 27 2009, 15:36:13 UTC
Really enjoyed the espisode in history of magic when Scorpius kept pressing his leg against Rose's, also loved how she confronted him about it afterwards. Very cute!

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paperback28 July 27 2009, 16:45:02 UTC
Wow! I like it :D
Your version of Scorpius is very well developed and rounded out,as is your Rose. Fabulous! Can't wait to find out who you are, mystery author :D

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orkyd July 27 2009, 17:38:07 UTC
I adored this piece. I love that Scorpius smiles. He doesn't smirk, he doesn't glare or brood, he smiles. It is very refreshing to read about a happy Scorpius and a happy, albeit shy, Rose. I also love that you built their relationship slowly and left them with a tentative, light, friendly hug at the end.

I love this sentence:
Either, Ron Weasley was guilty of gross exaggeration - quite likely, Rose concluded - or, Scorpius Malfoy was as different from his father as she was from hers.

It really gets the point across and lets the reader know not to expect carbon copies of their parents. All in all, I found this story completely refreshing and adorably sweet. Thanks for writing and sharing it =D

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muppet_puppet July 27 2009, 19:19:04 UTC
"Their families' reactions will be quite a scene to behold, I'd imagine."

Indeed! A sequel maybe? ;)

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