"Lesson of Your Life" - A Gift for lunalovepotter

Aug 09, 2009 05:46

Title:Lesson of Your Life
Author: ginny112
Gift For:lunalovepotter
Summary:Rose Weasley is in her sixth year at Hogwarts, and for the first time ever when she has to serve detention, Scorpius Malfoy plans to teach her something no book ever does.
Rating:PG-13
Warnings: None
Word Count:3700
Author's Note: Thanks to my beta, nowgold for the help.

Lesson of Your Life )

round two, author:ginny112, fic, rating:pg-13

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missdagane August 9 2009, 12:27:43 UTC
That was really sweet...

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lunalovepotter August 9 2009, 18:45:53 UTC
Thank you very much! I enjoyed this a lot. Rose's characterization was spot on, and the banter between her and Scorpius was great. I liked how you portrayed Rose's facade slowly coming apart throughout the story until she finally gives in to her feelings at the end.

“You should apologise,” she whispered breathlessly, “for pulling away like that. I was having fun.”

My favorite line. LOVED that - Rose is finally loosening up! :D Thanks again for this. I needed a smile today, and this really did the trick.

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orkyd August 9 2009, 21:49:36 UTC
I really loved your portrayal of Rose and Scorpius. I liked how they weren't best friends, but did have a friendship.

When Scorpius' soft, melty center came out, I really liked the tenderness he showed Rose. It was very sweet. Thanks for sharing this great fic with us =)

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lachambre11 August 11 2009, 20:10:06 UTC
I love how Scorpius got through Rose cool exterior in the end - a very fun story to read, thanks for writing it!

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