Comments | smokedsteps: i could bring you back again [ryan/brendon][s/a]

smokedsteps

i could bring you back again [ryan/brendon][s/a]

Oct 19, 2009 18:56

i could bring you back again || ryan/brendon || r || “I love you, too,” Brendon says back, and they kiss again, falling up. || warning: abusive relations || no beta so far || 1,940 words

( Ryan presses Brendon roughly into the sheets and all Brendon does is mewl softly. )

fandom!patd, pairing!ryan/brendon, rating!r

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isuzuchan44 October 23 2009, 00:42:41 UTC

thank yoooouuu~
yeah, I kind of feel like Ryan and Brendon just have this really awkward, frayed rope connecting them at the moment. Again, thank you very much!♥

coldmero October 23 2009, 00:18:49 UTC

Sorry for taking so long, man. Just got home like, forty minutes ago and have been dying all over my homework. While in front of the computer.

I didn't see any mistakes or anything, so you're good there.

The ending had a good feel. The hopefulness and stuff, yeah, it was good.

Good good good.

isuzuchan44 October 23 2009, 00:40:36 UTC

Thank you.
I just wanted to make ~sure, no pressure or nothing (Ryan looks pressured)

I didn't think you'd like this because it was stupid angst you know~ but I'm glad you did.

wecantwin October 23 2009, 02:06:19 UTC

holy fucking shit.

isuzuchan44 October 23 2009, 20:38:37 UTC

:D thank you?
I'm glad you liked it :D

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isuzuchan44 October 23 2009, 20:39:03 UTC

Awwww, tysm. Seven loves is quite a lot - I appreciate it.

luvvera October 23 2009, 18:40:46 UTC

It's weird how this story describes exactly how I feel.
I love that even thought they ended together, it still isn't a 'happy' ending.
Good job :)

isuzuchan44 October 23 2009, 20:40:21 UTC

Yeah, I kind of wanted to focus on how fucked up they both are - they love each other so much and yet they go about it the exact wrong way.
Thank you for reading!