Codependent [sean/tom][s/a]

[smokedsteps]

Title: Codependent
Pairing/Character(s): Sean Van Vleet/Tom Conrad
Rating: R
Summary: Three hours later, at almost one, Sean and Tom scramble into the men’s restroom and lock themselves in the stall furthest away from the door. Tom scrapes his finger nails up Sean’s stomach and chest, pulling his shirt off, cursing as he goes. “Avoiding each other’

Comments

[chibigirl626]

weirdly enough, i've written stuff similar to this, porn and everything, but you have done it so much better than i ever could. \o/ i love that last line so much, but i also love the whole fic, especially the little moments of them grossing out the rest of the band.

[eastdisease]

I highly doubt that to be completely true, seeing as I have read your porn and felt quite inferior. (And, not gonna lie, Tom being a creeper and groping Sean in public was my favorite.)

Thank you thank you thank you :')

[coldmero]

hey look at that sexy ass fight I wonder who suggested that!

nice, man. I think it fits the 'intense' prompt well. Very simple and short. The last two paragraphs are really strong, but I feel that maybe the fighting is cut a little too short in too little words (the smoothness of the last two paragraphs caught me somewhat off guard)

good feeling, though

[eastdisease]

Yeah, sometimes you have okay ideas.

I'm a little intrigued by you saying that, since it hadn't really crossed my mind. Looking back, you're right - it was kind of hurried, you know, written in a week and all!!! (not really an excuse, i am just saying) I'm glad the last part is strong, idk, the ending generally just felt a bit wobbly to me.

thanks~