And That Was Where I Lost You [tom/sean][s/a]

Aug 01, 2010 02:22

Title: And That Was Where I Lost You
Pairing/Character(s): Tom Conrad/Sean Van Vleet, Sean Van Vleet/Ryan Luciani
Rating: R
Summary: Sean finds Tom sitting at a train station.

“How long have you been here?”

Tom doesn’t twitch, just looks up at Sean slowly. “Eight and a half hours, approximately.” His voice is rough and dry, like he hasn’t moved since ( Read more... )

pairing!tom/sean, fandom!empires, rating!r

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coldmero August 2 2010, 18:46:44 UTC
I love this fic, it huurts. I already told you what parts I like the best... and I'm lazy and stupid, so I'm not going to copy and paste them again.

But like, you did a really good job making this real. Obviously I have never been a street thug, but the relationships are laid out really well.

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eastdisease August 3 2010, 03:54:28 UTC
Thanks, bro.

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eastdisease August 5 2010, 18:35:12 UTC
Thank you so much, that's great to hear.

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pinkichan August 6 2010, 07:15:37 UTC
You are constantly breaking my heart ;______;

Ugh Sean.

Okay I love this though it's so sweet and sad and does feel realistic and it's got that wonderful fucked up dynamic to it. Gorgeous!

Can I have fic where Sean and Tom bake cookies and play with kittens or something now? ;____;

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eastdisease August 6 2010, 16:09:07 UTC
I know, I know. It's not really intentional...hurt-y things just always are what come to mind.

But thank you so much :') As for cookie baking, maybe~

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sceaterian October 25 2010, 04:31:02 UTC
This is lovely and painful and perfectly broken. I'm so glad I stumbled across it. The implication that Tom managed to put himself back together at the expense of shattering all the lives around him is simply heartbreaking.

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eastdisease October 25 2010, 22:02:40 UTC
I'm so happy you found this! It made me want to reread it and I actually think I really like it (which is shocking for me, haha). Thank you so much for reading and enjoying.

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dare_to_forget December 6 2010, 01:52:06 UTC
I found your journal randomly, I think through anon_lovefest. I love this. I like stories with small vignettes that can work seamlessly together as one being, and you've really accomplished that here. I wish there were more empires fics out there! great job.

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eastdisease December 6 2010, 01:55:30 UTC
Oh, wow! I'm so happy to hear that, and to see that there's yet another empires fic fan out there. I admit to writing a couple of the far and few empires prompts that have popped up through alf, though I haven't written any serious empires fic since this one. I'm really, really pleased that you liked this. Thank you so, so much! :')

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