Fixed [tom/sean][s/a]

[smokedsteps]

Title: Fixed
Pairing/Character(s): Tom Conrad/Sean Van Vleet
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  In which Sean is a male stripper (with no chest hair) and Tom is a poor, sad man who can't talk in complete sentences.
Sean grins like a little kid, his face splitting, and just to make it fair Tom pushes another bill into the waistband of his jeans, this time a

Comments

[coldmero]

IF I was on the computer, I would show you chest hairless Sean, but I'm laying in bed rn.

Anyway, I honestly really like this fic and think it's one of the best you've written in a while. You do a lot of your description through like, actions and reactions (where lol I use a lot more visual) and that really worked out in this fic. I'd say you did Sean and Ryan perfectly, and you did Tom pretty well, especially considering this is your first empires fic (I am picky about Tom).

Keep writing empires.

[eastdisease]

Well, thanks for the offer, anyway.

Well, thank you. I dunno how I feel about 'best you've written in a while' because I have actually put effort into shit I have written recently, but I approve if you approve. I do enjoy using actions to describe people, I'm glad it worked. And thanks, even though Ryan's appearance was short-lived, I'm glad you thought Sean was ~perfect~ and I managed Tom ~pretty well~, especially considering you are picky, apparently.

It's something I'm considering, we'll see how it goes.

[coldmero]

wow, a simple thank you would have just fine, miss grumpy gills

[eastdisease]

Oh my god, did I 'sound' grumpy? Did I hurt you feelings? That was honestly not my intention! I was trying to respond well to your sort of constructive criticism. Sorry if I came off as displeased, I am quite appreciative of your actual!comment and am not grumpy in the least.

[seratonation]

oh man i really wish i had a picture of chest hairless sean

but, i really liked this! i liked toms train of thought, and how you can see there was something off about sean

lol you do empires pretty well, doesnt seem like the first time :D

[coldmero]

lol sorry for creeping on your comment, but here:

[seratonation]

lol not at all! not if your giving me sean van vleet!! man he is so pretty! thank you :D

[coldmero]

he is sooo pretty. you're very welcome c:

[eastdisease]

hee ♥ well if you manage a more coherent comment, i would be more than pleased. ty for reading~

[battleofhydaspe]

Dude, dude! First of all, Tom/Sean! It's nice to finally be able to read a story that I didn't have to write by myself /o\ But that's beside the point.

I'm usually rather wary of the stripper/hooker premise but you actually managed to pull it off. And I really liked your Tom!

[eastdisease]

That's the plan! I kind of have just been introduced to Empires...but be expecting fic. A good deal of fic. I like writing. Oh my. I want to help bring Empires fic back!

Thank you so much! ♥ I was really unsure of myself with this, because honestly, the stripper scenario was very what the fuck to me...but thank you thank you thank you!

[pinkichan]

Empires fic!!!!!!

Gah, I loved this it was quiet and mysterious and tinged with sadness and Tom!

&hearts

[eastdisease]

Indeed!!!!

Thank yooouuuuu ♥