Fic: On Holiday by Mistake (2/?)

Feb 02, 2008 18:49

I come bearing more fic! *proud grin*


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kimchiburger February 3 2008, 01:43:02 UTC
To prevent people from thinking I'm insane, please read this comment as if it was typed in all caps.

But eee~! I like what you have there! And Iris! Oh god, I'm in love with your Iris yet again. I feel like I want to illustrate her pulling out her laser gun.

Because: Iris strode over to her coat and pulled a bright pink laser gun from the pocket. “You want alien?” she growled, “I’ll give you alien.” is my favorite quote of the bunch. I don't know why, but it is.

I think this chapter kind of needed more Withnail though. More drunken men who are drugged out of their asses. 8D; Though I guess the conversation between "Marwood" and Iris is a bit intense. I'd be keeping quiet too. Eh, whatever, I STILL LOVE ANGRY!IRIS.

Iris looked back and forth slowly between the two men. “Fuck. Not only have you lost your memory again, you’ve gone gay, haven’t you?”

YES YES YES YES YES MY CAPS JUST LEAKED THROUGH BUT YES YES YES AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

IRIS IS MY HERO.

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smkwriter08 February 3 2008, 02:07:56 UTC
YAY IRIS~~~ :D;

Yes, next chapter is a Withnailier chapter. I was afraid he'd just get in the way and/or steal the show if he were around too much here...

Omigod would you do illustrations for me? Please? Please? *__*

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iansmomesq February 3 2008, 02:30:28 UTC
OH your Iris is wonderful!!!!!!!!! And Marwood = Doctor is even better and the dialogue is amazing and and and I'm so much loving this story!

*loves*

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my face actually looks like David Tennant's right now-- it kind of hurts... smkwriter08 February 3 2008, 02:36:58 UTC
Ahh thank you so much~~ I'm ever so glad that you like it~~ :DD

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wheresmycow February 3 2008, 02:56:58 UTC
Marwood = Doctor? Oh man, I did NOT expect that. *grins* But considering this is Eight, after all...

This is so fucking typical of you. Slightest amount of trouble and you forget what a fucking bastard you are.

This is the third bloody time you've pulled this shit on us!

HAHA! Amnesia as a fallback defense mechanism -- S.O.P. for Eight! *ROFLs*

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smkwriter08 February 3 2008, 04:07:23 UTC
Oh eight, your brain = so much fail. *grins* It seemed to me that at some point, everyone would stop feeling bad for him and just get irritated with him... XD;

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lilyofshalott February 3 2008, 03:00:26 UTC
Oh, this is excellent!

Poor Marwood--Iris has confused him quite a bit. Erm, that *is* Marwood, right? Because only Iris got pulled into the vortex and the Doctor's still on the TARDIS, yes? But then there's the bit with the two hearts, so I'm not entirely sure . . .

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smkwriter08 February 3 2008, 04:06:04 UTC
La, I'm failing a bit, aren't I? That is the Doctor... *points at the hearts, is frightfully embarrassed*

Iris is assuming the Doctor crashed, as well. We'll see how it goes... ;)

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smkwriter08 February 3 2008, 04:09:25 UTC
Umum, wherein lies the not-clarity? So I can retcon things in the next chapter... XDDD;;;;

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lilyofshalott February 3 2008, 04:34:55 UTC
Well, we haven't seen the Doctor crash yet--Iris just assumes he has, so maybe he's still on the TARDIS? And Marwood's much younger-looking than the Doctor. (Unless of course this is going to be all wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey--of which I approve.)

On the other hand, there is the whole lack-of-memory of parents/general amnesia. And the two hearts.

Oh, and I'm sure the fail is all mine.

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wshaffer February 3 2008, 04:19:47 UTC
Ha, this is great fun! This is also my first real exposure to Iris Wildthyme - I've definitely gotta track down some of the books/audios she's in.

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smkwriter08 February 3 2008, 04:29:20 UTC
Ah~! You should go check at halfhumandoctor... You'll have to join the comm to see, though. *is carefully not saying much on a public entry, ahahaha*

Also, some of her stories exist online at The Iris Wildthyme Pages-- my favourite is Iris explains. My Iris is most like the Iris in there... a lot of her other incarnations have been more on the old and decrepit side. *nods*

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