[Criminal Minds] Acute Angles (Prentiss/Rossi/Hotch, NC-17) (4/4)

[smittywing]

It's only, what, a year late? SO many apologies.

Title: Acute Angles
Author: smittywing/Smitty
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/David Rossi/Aaron Hotchner (and subpairings within)
Rating: NC-17/FRAO/NSFW/Etc. This part is like, almost all sex.
Wordcount: ~11,300 for this part, 40,000 words total
Spoilers/Warning: All seasons/episodes through 5x11: Slave of Duty,

Comments

[amichevole]

♥

I have been waiting for this for so long. Writing threesomes *beyond* PWP is a difficult feat, and you have executed it perfectly. It's about more than sex. It's about love, and friendship and companionship. Each sub-pairing perfectly complements its compatriots. I'm not usually a big fan of Hotch/Prentiss, but somehow, it makes so much sense when you add Rossi into the mix.

Keep up the super awesomeness.

[mingsmommy]

Okay...this story is amazing. It actually goes beyond amazing...it's art.

This story is one blazing hot sex scene staked on top of another. They're all nuclear hot and each has a layer of feeling and sensory engagement that I seldom see from professional writers. You convey so much with a word or two...and when you use more than a word or two, you paint such gorgeous scenes, that simultaneously make me feel like I am there and make me long to be there.

But, here's the thing: I started reading it as porn, as a threesome, as an interesting look at how sex would work in such a relationship with three such strong people. But this? This is about far more than sex. This is about love, about a true polyamorous relationship and how each part makes up the whole and the whole is not complete without each part.

Just a masterful, hot, gorgeous story.

It's been a privilege to read it.

[kosmickway]

This is, quite simply, the most gorgeous, sexy, "OMFG, WHY couldn't I have written this?!" piece of fic I have EVER read. It's exactly what Ming says ... beautifully sculpted, pitch-perfect art that literally had me giggling, crying, sighing, OMGing, and wishing like HELL I was Emily through the whole story.

This is a masterpiece of which I hope you are EXTREMELY proud. I plan to bookmark it and read it again and again and again.

Hail to thee, Goddess of the Threesome.

[trust_know_1]

Stunning, simply stunning. The depth of character is astounding. It's not just sex but sorrow, love, and everything in between. Also, the rhythm of the entire fic is phenomenal. It flows from start to finish and allows the reader to see the progression and growth of all three within their relationship. I think it is brilliant to offset past/present realities so that the reader learns how past events inform their current relationship.

You do such an excellent job at placing the reader within the story, that it is impossible not to be a bit jealous :D

Thank you so so much for sharing. A truly excellent work.

[kimmeke_86]

I just had to answer on this one. I first of all have to say, this is so so so not my cup of tea.... not my thing. BUT your writing is really really amazing!