[Criminal Minds] Coming Down on a Sunny Day (1/1)
One of the tiny ficlets I wrote for the Criminal Minds Kink Meme. I say tiny, it's still 2200 words. I tried to make it longer, too, but I'd fit in the background material around the edges and was loathe to take it out again. Title is from CCR's "Have You Ever Seen the Rain." shetiger beta'd for me since yes, I get my comment fic beta'd. ;)
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Perfect!
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I love how you jump in the middle of the action. Him giving her his drink to finish just...*flail* somehow, that is a level of intimacy that is more telling to me than the sex. And how she has to remind herself it's okay for him to kiss her temple because she's just told him to fuck her.
Then he's hauling her in, pulling her against him, and kissing her like he might lose her at any second.
This image just shatters me. I love how much he wants her.
The sex is amazingly hot...I especially love how she just can't look at him. And I love how desperate Emily is and how he knows she's not done. The best is that it's her touch on his leg that makes him come.
Rossi kisses the back of her neck, her shoulder, the junction where they meet. As far as Emily's concerned, he can keep doing that forever. SQUEEEEE!!!! Gorgeous, wonderful. That is just ( ... )
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