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smithyfic

Shot

Mar 19, 2007 19:16

Title: Shot
Prompt/Number: Sample // 000
Rating: PG (swearing)
Character/Fandom: Kaile Maka // CSI:NY
Word Count: 200
A/N: For dramaticmuses.

( A lot of people talk about how they wake up in the back of an ambulance, they pass out, they wake up in the hospital, blahblahblah. )

csi: new york ficlet, dm

Comments 5

afteriwake March 20 2007, 03:10:54 UTC

This was really good. I could definitely hear Maka saying that.

smithyfic March 20 2007, 04:26:49 UTC

Thank you! ^^ I was a little nervous writing her at first, but she seems to be going alright. :)

iluvroadrunner6 March 20 2007, 03:22:15 UTC

I second what Ragna said. Really nice job.

smithyfic March 20 2007, 04:33:23 UTC

Thanks! ^^ Ever since I posted that, Maka won't shut, so expect something fic-ish with her sometime soon (soon being relative, since it's me. X) )

(PS: Do you wanna rp the dinner, or just leave it like it is? ^^;;)

iluvroadrunner6 March 20 2007, 04:40:51 UTC

we could rp it if you want. it's cool by me.