[Fic:]The Expected, The Unprepared And The Odd (HP/SM)

Nov 23, 2015 22:33

Title: The Expected, The Unprepared And The Odd
Author: smirkingcat
Summary: Harry didn't expect it to be easy, but does it really have to be hard?
Word Count: 3,379
Rating: PG-13
Content/Warning(s): fluff, so much fluff
Disclaimer: Harry Potter characters are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No profit is being made, and no copyright ( Read more... )

char: dracomalfoy, gift, fanfiction, contains: fluff, pairing: hpsm, char: scorpiusmalfoy

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tryslora November 23 2015, 22:03:53 UTC
Aww, that's very sweet. I love how Draco is more accepting than Harry's friends were, that Draco has grown up enough to know that it is most important of all to see one's loved ones happy. And the comparison of Scorpius and Aquila to Fred and George made me giggle outright.

THANK YOU so much, hon. *squishes*

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smirkingcat November 23 2015, 22:21:47 UTC
awww
thank you so much!
*hugs*
and i like the idea of aquila and scorp being close- if i ever feel the urge there will be more of them
i'm so happy this worked for you and made you smile <3
thanks for everything you always do for us and being so awesome! *squishes back*
and yay for liking first part of gift *does happy dance*

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nia_kantorka November 23 2015, 22:08:09 UTC
Awww, you are such a darling. I loved it!!! I love your Scorpius being posessive and proud of his bf. I loved that it took Harry so much longer to feel the same need (show off his bf) and that he was so afraid of Draco's reaction because the waiting only made it worse. I loved the glimpses we got of their relationship. They seemed to work quite well on their relationship (big rows and the best make-up sex did sound great ;p). And I loved Draco who knew them both so well and was such a loving father. Ah, and Aquila. He sounded like an interesting little brother and his name was great.

Thank you so much for my half of this fic! It's been a wonderful and totally surprising present!
*hugs tight*
<3333333 (mobile hearts)

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smirkingcat November 23 2015, 22:25:17 UTC
*hugs tightly*
yes! that is great to read- thank you so much for liking it
and well maybe there will come something more in the future ;) as i quite like it the way i set it up
i also imagine its worse to tell your rival your dating his kids than a stranger so i really wouldnt want to change with harry
and thanks for liking aquila- it took me ages of finding a constellation name that would do scorp and his brother justice!
and they both have quite some stories to tell *evil grin*
*hugs*
i'm so glad you like it
and yes for surprise to be working - *hugs again* i'm so happy you liked it!

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prettysophist November 24 2015, 04:44:38 UTC
This is great. Very proud of Draco for being so accepting; I don't think he would have taken it quite so well if it had been the surprise they wanted it to me. Not at all surprised that he had already figured it out. That must really have eaten at him, though, wondering why Scorpius was unwilling to share such big news with him.

I also really like the way you address the age issue between them. My biggest problem with crossgen fics is that I always wonder if whatever solutions they come to will still work a year down the line, or five, so the established relationship worked very well for me, I really feel they have a shot at a happily ever after.

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smirkingcat November 24 2015, 06:15:49 UTC
thank you so much for your huge compliment and your very nice comment!!!
and i totally agree with you, if draco hand't known before he would for certain be thrown - but somehow i felt from the start, that scorpius and harry would never be able to hide such big news from him- because he knows them both just to well, it only makes sense that way to me

and also thank you aqgain for this compliment- this is the reason i struggle with cross gen too, because i know that age is a matter and most of the time not an unconscious one and so i struggled to show what i needed to show, and i'm very happy that this worked very well for you, and it makes me really proud of it!
thanks for you comment <3

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capitu November 24 2015, 11:14:26 UTC
Oh my dear. That was so incredibly lovely. I loved it. Draco surprised me in the best, the very best of ways. I loved how he waited until Scorpius came, and I loved that his reaction was ask how he had failed when Scorpius didn't trust him. I loved that Harry finally spoke and told him it was his fears that made Scorpius not come forward earlier.

Harry and Scorpius have something great, and I know it'll only be fuller now that it's in the open to all the people that matters to them. So very touching and lovely, dear. <33

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smirkingcat November 24 2015, 20:14:32 UTC
THANK YOU! so much <3
i was in such a tumult over this fic
and you liking it means a lot to me

and yes for liking draco- thanks so much! i like him this way a lot to
thanks!
*hijacks rocked goes to fly over moon*

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llaeyro November 25 2015, 01:22:47 UTC
This was so cute, I loved the dynamic between Scorpius and Harry, and seeing how much Draco has changed and grown =)

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smirkingcat November 25 2015, 06:44:39 UTC
thank you very much for your kind comment!

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