Night Terrors (complete)

[smilesawakeyou]

So I went through with it and completed that small bit I had written. I can't decide if this story makes me feel psycho or not. Hrm :/

Title: Night Terrors
Author: Me.
Fandom: The Dark Knight
Pairing: Joker/Batman in a reeeeeeally fucked up way
Rating: Uh... between PG-13 and R for disturbing images and themes
Disclaimer: I don't own this, obvi.

Comments

[drwhorose]

creepy good. It definitely falls within activities the Joker would engage in. Good line by the way: “I’d love to be your first.”

[smilesawakeyou]

Thanks! That line sort of came about organically, which is always nice. But seriously, thanks for reading!

[drwhorose]

no problem. love your "fantastic" icon by the way, love for Doc9

[seewhatimesdone]

This is so great!

“My cousin though…” Clucking his tongue, he shakes his head. “Well, he just wasn’t so lucky because, you see, his smile? He got his on his neck.” Totally awesome.

I love how you've shown that Joker knows he can escape but he doesn't because he just doesn't feel like it.

Great job!

[smilesawakeyou]

Aw, thanks so much! It's been awesome getting such nice feedback for something I wasn't at all sure about. So yeah, thanks for reading!

[lye]

I just got back from The Dark Knight viewing number two, and wow, this just makes the entire thing so much better. This is really amazing. It's so vivid, and so in character for the Joker. I feel like you definitely captured him in this. It's just so creepy, he's so fundamentally evil, and yet you still feel for him without really meaning to. His voice was just perfect. In short, THIS WINS.

[lisechen]

...was that last girl Harley? 'Cause that would be awesome.

He thinks she’d look nice with a smile.

That line gave me shivers, dude.

Well done.

[deepsea_dreamer]

this was really, really ... just ... wow. I have no words. But i definatly know that i loved this.