Sex Can Wait: Masturbate!

[smilesawakeyou]

To those of you who asked when the next chapter of Sleep Madness would be up, the answer is... NOW!

Title: Sex Can Wait: Masturbate! (Sleep Madness series: 7/?)
Author: Yours truly
Fandom: The Daily Show.
Pairing: Jon/Stephen
Rating: R or NC-17 (I don’t know, I suck at ratings) for language and, well, the touching of unmentionable man-bits.

Comments

[warriorpoet]

Okay. This?

“Jon,” he grunts, his throat sounding raw. “Jon, I could hear you. Every time I could hear you when you jerked off in the shower.” I’m beginning to see stars behind my eyelids, a groan grating out of me. “I could hear you and I’d listen, fuck, I’d listen every time and wish, just wish and fucking wonder if maybe you were thinking about me.” He squeezes harder and whispers, “Were you thinking of me? Did you think of me Jon?” I nod wordlessly. “Good, because every time I touch myself I think of you too.”

Is FUCKING. MIND MELTING.

However uncomfortable you might be with writing the smutty stuff, it doesn't show. Your sensory descriptions are amazing.

[smilesawakeyou]

I actually hadn't thought of that line or anything to put there really and then my brain just randomly produced Stephen dirty-talking. I like it when that happens. Oh, unexpectedness :D

Thanks for helping me not think my smut sucks. I think this turned out fine upon taking a second look but it would be nice if I didn't have to work so damn hard to make it not suck.

Anyway, thanks for reading!!!! ♥♥♥♥

[burn_to_emerge]

*flails* I think this is the first time I've commented on this story, because I'm awful, but I just adore this fic. As warriorpoet said, your sensory descriptions are amazing. Not just with the sexy stuff, but with everything Jon was going through. It's really hard to pull off a meltdown without it seeming overwrought, but I was seriously right there with Jon. So, so in character and hot and heartbreaking and giddy! That goes for Stephen as well. It's too late for me to be coherent, but this= AMAZING.

[smilesawakeyou]

Hey, don't worry about not commenting! I, of course, adore it when people DO comment, but I neglect in commenting enough that it would be hypocritical of me to demand everyone to comment on everything. Wow, I just wrote the word "comment" a lot.

...Comment.

Sorry, I don't know why I digressed like that. Anyway, I wrote Jon's meltdown, like, 7 times because it kept feeling like Capslock!Harry in the 5th book of Harry Potter when he fluctuates from insane emo boy to raging needing-anger-management boy. But, in the end, I'm glad I worked at least some of the kinks out and I'm really glad it didn't feel overwrought to you. I seriously hate overwrought angst.

Okay, this is a stupidly long response to your incredibly wonderful review. Basically: thanks for reading and being awesome! ♥♥

...Also, your icon ROCKS. Oh, Michael Cera *hugs*

[muic]

Very hawt. Missed your fics a lot. The intensity of Jon's anger in the first half was tragically beautiful.

-does happy dance to celebrate the return of your fics!-

[smilesawakeyou]

Aw. *joins in your happy dance because she's glad to be back* Oh, how I've missed you crazy, crazy kids.

Thanks for reading!!!

[otnat]

First of all - YAY for happy ending! I'll love you forever because of that alone. And your love scene was so hot, loving, and perfect. Dont ever be uncomfortable writing them.
You seriously need to write hundreds of Jon/Stephen stories! You are just soooo good at it. And your sensory and visual descriptions are wonderful.

"...as my hands spider-walk their way up his arms to grip his shoulders."

'spider-walk their way' That line really stuck out to me as unique; I loved it. Its just the kind of visual description that you can see perfectly in your mind's eye, and most other writers wouldnt think to write/describe it that way.

[smilesawakeyou]

I like angst but I can't bear to have everything end on a downside. That would just be cruel, you know? I like to at least reward my characters with a happy ending after relentlessly torturing them.

I'd write more Jon/Stephen if I could come up with more storylines. Unfortunately my brain only thinks of cracky AUs in most cases so... sad times.

I love the term "spider-walk." I think some author I read as a kid used that term to describe someone touching someone else and I thought it was gorgeous. So, uh, kudos to that unknown inspirer.

THANKS FOR READING!!!!

[indiwise]

Oh, this was fantastic. SO hot. And very well-written.

[violent_rabbit]

OH FUCK ME THIS WAS A PERFECT DENONUMENT. Oh god I am so completly satisfied right now! I honestly went out and smoked a blissful ciggarette.

This bit in particular was hot and gorgeous and so very charged I was all metly and caught up (in other words perfect but I didnt want to repeat myself) The couch sex line and
“Jon,” he grunts, his throat sounding raw. “Jon, I could hear you. Every time I could hear you when you jerked off in the shower.” I’m beginning to see stars behind my eyelids, a groan grating out of me. “I could hear you and I’d listen, fuck, I’d listen every time and wish, just wish and fucking wonder if maybe you were thinking about me.” He squeezes harder and whispers, “Were you thinking of me? Did you think of me Jon?” I nod wordlessly. “Good, because every time I touch myself I think of you too.”

GUH

Thank you some much for writing this, it has been such a fave of mine for ages. :D

[smilesawakeyou]

I DON'T KNOW WHAT DENONUMENT MEANS BUT THANK YOU ANYWAY. You had a cigarette? Hee. That honestly made me do a happy squee-giggle that was embarrassing.

Thanks for liking the whole story so much! It's been a labor of love, that's for sure.

[smilesawakeyou]

Thank you, dear :) And thanks for reading!