Friend is a Four-Letter Word

Sep 15, 2007 02:25

Sorry, flist, for not updating sooner. Notes On A Scandal and Kinsey were distracting me... that and I'm pretty sure my roommate read some of my slash so I'm kind of having a panic attack. WHY DID HE USE MY COMPUTER? WHY? Ahem, here be the fic:

Title: Friend is a Four-Letter Word (Sleep Madness series: 5/?)
Author: Yours truly
Fandom: The Daily ( Read more... )

fic: the daily show, friend is a four-letter word, sleep madness, slash, pairing: jon/stephen, fandom: the daily show

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foureyedsnail September 15 2007, 07:22:11 UTC
Gah you made me cry. ):

Fortuitous, I had my iTunes on some sad Elliott Smith song so it's one big teary party woo.

The way Stephen kind of engineers it--devilish. God, he's got to feel so bad for that, with that reaction.

But oh, the last scene was raw. I can't quote all those paragraphs, but oh. Jon blaming himself, Stephen's hands leaping off as if burned, everything. But especially these:

“We’re drunk. It’s all right.”....“Drinking and driving and drinking and fucking are two completely different things,” he replies, his voice unintentionally cold.

“Go to bed Jon,” Stephen murmurs, his voice not unkind

Not unkind. SO SAD.

*looks for tissues* lovely.

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smilesawakeyou September 17 2007, 18:18:10 UTC
Gah you made me cry. ):
Oh no! I'm sorry! This story made people a lot sadder than I intended... oops

Elliot Smith will do that though.

Stephen will cope. You'll see. That Stewart... he's just a tough nut to crack ;-)

THANKS FOR READING! Hopefully I'll be writing more soon...

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smilesawakeyou September 22 2007, 18:19:52 UTC
Stephen is a cute little devil. Just poor Jon is kiiiiiiiinda oblivious... :(

What can I say, I'm a sucker for miscommunication.

THANKS FOR READING!!!

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ilysespieces September 15 2007, 08:32:29 UTC
so good/sad/angsty!
i love it. i really do love your writing. it is quite unique and lovely.

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smilesawakeyou September 22 2007, 18:22:24 UTC
it is quite unique and lovely.
Aw, thanks sweetums! This story is fun because I get to write from such a different perspective that's still oddly similar to my own. Does that make sense? Haha

Anyway, THANKS FOR READIIIING!

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typicalperson September 15 2007, 13:36:40 UTC
Eeep! So tense, so close, so… gut-twisting. So good.

I smirked at the receptionist's smirk - ah, fangirls, they're we're everywhere.

I'm a bit confused about the cat part though. Seeing as Jon has had (still has?) cats it seemed slightly out-of-character (well, what I imagine his character to be). Or was it more about his being inebriated and fed-up being somewhere he didn't want to be, forced into a conversation he had no interest in with someone he had no interest in?

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smilesawakeyou September 22 2007, 18:25:56 UTC
I smirked at the receptionist's smirk - ah, fangirls, they're we're everywhere.
Yeah, that girl was totally not a Mary-Sue or anything. Nope. Nada. *twidles thumbs while whistling nonchalantly*

Or was it more about his being inebriated and fed-up being somewhere he didn't want to be, forced into a conversation he had no interest in with someone he had no interest in?
That's exactly it. Jon still loves all animals but while drunk, a man can only have so much patience with an avid cat lady. I mean, even I end up hating cats at the end of a conversation like that. And I love cats. They have such a wonderful "fuck you!" attitude that warms my soul :D

THANKS FOR READIIING!

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chris_baby September 15 2007, 14:23:39 UTC
You are wonderful! This story is wonderful. Your Jon and Stephen are wonderful and I'm just so happy right now. Well, also a little sad, for them, but happy because you write them so well and I like my boys with two shots of happy and one shot of sad.

Oh. And this isn't the end the end, right?

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smilesawakeyou September 22 2007, 18:37:54 UTC
D'aw, your icon made me grin :D

You are wonderful! This story is wonderful. Your Jon and Stephen are wonderful and I'm just so happy right now. Well, also a little sad, for them, but happy because you write them so well and I like my boys with two shots of happy and one shot of sad.
Weeeee, nicest comment everrrrrr! Seriously, even more stupid grinning is happening on my end now :D I enjoy the boys that way too, as is obvious because I keep torturing them. Oh, sweet sweet sadism.

And no, this is not the end because, though sadistic, I'm not that sadistic. And I enjoy writing this too much. I've begun the next chapter but we'll see how that works out, knowing my writing patterns. But yeah, I'm planning on about 2 other chapters and then an epilogue perhaps.

THANKS FOR READING, SCHMOOPSIE!

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