Challenge Drabble - Five Things No One Else Knows

Nov 08, 2007 23:48

Rating: G, although there is a Dead!Jack warning. 
Disclaimer:  Jack and Ennis were created by the great and mighty Annie Proulx. Pay no attention to the short little banshee behind the yellow curtain. Also, this drabble was totally inspired by tonight's Grey's Anatomy. Oh this is technically 25 words too long for a drabble...so go ahead, sue me.

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fizzerbass November 9 2007, 05:31:52 UTC
You stinkin' dog. My ears perked up as much as Lexie's when Meredith said, "That's five things" and I thought it would make a great challange entry. You beat me to it - arrgh! (Well, at least now I don't feel guilty posting something before we uhm, you know, since you did it first.)

This was great, Em. Loved the bite marks on the ass and your first one actually plays in slightly to what I'm about to post - great minds and all that.

Thanks for this - it is magnifico - like you. :D

Fizzer

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smiles_a_lot November 9 2007, 16:42:48 UTC
Hey you're a double stinkin' dog! You had a whole freakin' CHAPTER you'd written and now you're wanting my little drabble? Do you know how hard it is for me to come up with ideas before you snap them away faster than a winged monkey wearing really bad leather? Damn right I'm posting as soon as I can. Karev's sexy smirk barely faded from the screen and I was at my notebook, baby, you know it.

I knew you'd like those bite marks. That horn-dog Ennis. Who knew? xx Em

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Yeah??? ennis4me November 9 2007, 20:26:14 UTC
I always envisioned Ennis getting a ton of nightmares from his perverse father.

So interested in what you have to say, Fizz. Hurry please!!!

Thanks.....Adrianne

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Re: Yeah??? smiles_a_lot November 9 2007, 20:52:31 UTC
Adrianne - Actually fizzy's referring to Part 6 of her Five Best Things series, which was posted a few minutes after I posted this last night. You'll find it on brobackslash. I know...it's very confusing having 6 parts to something called Five Best Things, but that's fizzy for you. xx Em

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torry28 November 9 2007, 06:51:41 UTC
Come on you two, write something together you know you want to,this could be the "chardas" of all time.

Thank you Em, very wonderful.
Torry

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smiles_a_lot November 9 2007, 16:47:59 UTC
Hey Torry. You know, I love you and all that and would love to please you but Fizzer and I -- well we just can't work together. She'd drive me bat-shit crazy. She's kind of like that crazy friend you like to have a glass of wine with but could never live with. Work together? I get dizzy thinking about it.

Glad I was able to snatch this from Fizzer's jaws. Thanks for your comment. xx Em

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fizzerbass November 9 2007, 20:37:43 UTC
Glad you only get dizzy, sister - 'cause I break out in hives thinking about it. Work with Em? Why in the blue fuck would you think that was a good idea? Bat-shit crazy doesn't even begin to describe it. Y'know the banshee yell she has? Well, it's her only volume. Girl can't whisper for nothin' - gonna need me a hearing aid soon.

And the only reason you snatched this from my jaws, Miss Em-is-everywhere, is because I was sad and blue and needing a hug from you. Where were you I might ask? Biting Ennis's ass apparently.

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smiles_a_lot November 9 2007, 20:55:35 UTC
Hey you stole that hives thing!! I want it back. I'm the one that breaks out in hives. You're the one that gets the nervous twitch. Get it straight. *smiles looks pointedly at her "I'm With Stupid" mug pointing directly at You Know Who.

Tee hee. Can't believe you're mad at me because Ennis is ass-bitten. You're just jealous. ♥ Em

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eandj November 9 2007, 07:15:00 UTC
"Jack Twist’s last and final wish was to do it all over again. Every bit of it. Because what he had at the last was a treasure trove of hidden gems, recovered from a lonely windswept isle. And the certainty that Jack had done something right and good by loving his long, tall, cowboy unto his last breath."
This is perfect and comforting at the end
Thank you for this
Paula

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smiles_a_lot November 9 2007, 16:49:26 UTC
Thanks Paula. My deadJack stuff tends to have a soft edge to it. My heart can't take it any other way. Thanks for your comment. xx Em

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sienata November 9 2007, 07:35:48 UTC
Yeah, i liked the thought that Jack had no regrets and would do it all again. Sad but sweet. Thanks. S!

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smiles_a_lot November 9 2007, 16:50:21 UTC
Thanks so much S. I just hate the thought of Jack bitter and empty at the end. xx Em

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poppyhoney_67 November 9 2007, 07:46:11 UTC
Oh damn, that was happy/sad. I loved it. Loved the "knock knock" "Who's there"....to me, that's totally Jack. Could see Ennis roll his eyes but doing it anyway.

Gorgeous honey.

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smiles_a_lot November 9 2007, 16:52:16 UTC
Thanks, sweetie. I can just picture Jack responding to a "Knock, knock" joke from Bobby, and then filing it away to tell Ennis. Glad you liked this. ♥ Em

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