Challenge Fic - The Blues

Oct 25, 2007 17:18


Rating/Warning: PG for mild cursing. This does come with a Dead!Jack warning, though. Here be sadness.  
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack were created by Annie Proulx. All laud and honour go to her. 
Summary: Ennis contemplates different shades of blue and how they colour his life. 
A/N: I wrote this yesterday, when it seemed clearer than usual that there ( Read more... )

one-shot, smiles_a_lot, challenge

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smiles_a_lot October 29 2007, 17:20:31 UTC
I know. Hands Linds a tissue. xx Em

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jacks_key October 25 2007, 23:11:14 UTC
Damn, that was...intense. Very well written!

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smiles_a_lot October 29 2007, 17:21:26 UTC
I love that word intense. Especially when Jake says it. If only he was saying it to MEEEEEEE! Thanks. - Em

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samtyr October 26 2007, 00:11:38 UTC
This was heartbreaking and great at the same time. Thank you for sharing it.

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smiles_a_lot October 29 2007, 17:22:16 UTC
Thanks for reading and indulging me in my momentary crash to reality. - Em

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fizzerbass October 26 2007, 00:24:58 UTC
I was going to be smart and sassy and ask you where in the blue fuck this came from but this piece is much too beautiful to be sullied with crass kidding and joshing.

This was amazing. All of the different shades of blue burning through me like the blue at the innermost heart of a blazing hot flame. Blood-stained blue...that has to be the most bitterweet, evocative phrase I have heard in a month of Sundays.

Well done, friend. Very well done.

Fizzer

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smiles_a_lot October 29 2007, 17:23:33 UTC
You're always smart and sassy. You could never sully anything. Blood-stained blue, I think that's the spot where my own tears started to flow. Thanks, friend. ♥ Em

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luvjacknasty October 26 2007, 01:01:37 UTC
That was really gorgeous! Of course the bloodstained blue got me good. How appropraite since a lot us have the blues these days. Really beautiful piece!

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smiles_a_lot October 29 2007, 17:24:48 UTC
Thanks so much, LJN. Well I think I'm getting over it. I just want him to be happy. And to make plenty more movies wearing low slung boxers. Gulp. xx Em

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