Microfic - Round 9

Mar 03, 2009 21:07


Genre/Rating: BBM, mostly Au!Au,  R
Pairings: Jack/Ennis in The Dance and Bank Shot Universe.
Disclaimer: Jack and Ennis were created by the Great and Mighty Annie Proulx. I'm just the dude behind the yellow curtain working the lights and using the Big Voice microphone.
Notes:  For those who have been following this...here's round 9. *Sniff* ( Read more... )

smiles_a_lot, microfic

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anonymous March 9 2009, 13:08:54 UTC
You’re the real hero here. You never gave up. Never

Awwww...that is so sweet...*melts*

Still laughing my ass off over poor Sam, though. You know, I'd be willing to trade places with him...

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brokeback1963 March 9 2009, 13:51:04 UTC
Smut: (Bank Shot)
(Jack goes under the blanket and Ennis pops up for air.)

“Hey,” (to Sam) “You’re awake.”

“You think?”

“Sorry.”

“Riiight.” (glances down at action under blanket.) “Slurpy time again?”

-LMAO!!! Poor Sam!! He cracks me up.

Hurt/Comfort: (Bank Shot)

“That’s why I slipped!” (chuckles) “My life flashed before my eyes!”

-LOL!!! The bank boys are so freaking awesome!!

Fluff: (The Dance)

“You’re the real hero here. You never gave up. Never.”

-Aww, damn, so sweet.

Unresolved Sexual Tension: (The Dance)

(Ennis begins to walk his horse closer.)

“And what are you doing? You said you’d be good!”

-This is so sexy!! I love it when they get all wicked and naughty.

Thank you so much, babe. Tomorrow mooooooore!!

Love and big hugs.

Tammy.

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tmn1966 March 9 2009, 14:15:36 UTC
I've not been very good at commenting lately and I'm sorry for that. I really do love these "dribbles" and I can't believe that tomorrow will be the last one!

You've really done an excellent job with these, Em. It's so good to see any of your writing. :)

L&H,
Teri

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lovewithstands March 9 2009, 19:05:14 UTC
I liked these parts

Didn’t know you were that flexible.”

“I’m not….”
“That’s why I slipped!” (chuckles) “My life flashed before my eyes!”

That was too funny made me chuckel too :)

And

“You gotta good heart too, Ennis, underneath all that rough.”

(Ennis fiddles with the popcorn bowl.) “Only you would say that.”

“Only you would let me.”
….
“You’re the real hero here. You never gave up. Never.”

That was just to sweet :)

I can't wait to see what else you have to add tomorrow

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trekfan March 9 2009, 22:25:32 UTC
real good EM :D

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