Comments | smilebackwards: Five Secrets Lorne and Zelenka Share [sga fic]

smilebackwards

Apr 02, 2009 18:43

Title: Five secrets Lorne and Zelenka share
Characters: Lorne, Zelenka
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~500
Summary: They are good at keeping secrets.
Note: Written for prompt 67.05 at sg1_five_things

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In one of the sub-basements at the end of the West Pier, there is a damaged Ancient virtual reality machine stuck in an experimental puddlejumper flight simulation program. )

Comments 9

gelbes_gilatier April 2 2009, 18:15:53 UTC

Perfect. Honestly, I loved it. All the words one needed to tell these little stories and... just perfect. LOTS of love for this one :)

beadattitude April 2 2009, 18:44:28 UTC

This just makes me so happy.

becs8 April 2 2009, 19:19:23 UTC

very nice

autumn2525 April 2 2009, 19:37:16 UTC

Yay! I just love them so! And Sheppard's pavlovian response to performance reviews made me laugh out loud.

outsideth3box April 2 2009, 20:59:25 UTC

That was lovely.

I'm so glad I wasn't drinking when you hit me with "Lorenka."