Week 3 - In Another Castle

Apr 01, 2014 00:07

Aliyah's slumber was disturbed by a soft, scuffling sound coming from the entrance of the chamber. She woke to see her son, Isa, standing over her, lower lip trembling and eyes brimming with tears. She sat up and pulled him into a gentle embrace. "What happened, my child?" She whispered softly into his ear, gently stroking his hair ( Read more... )

fiction, lj idol, my writing, week 3

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kickthehobbit March 31 2014, 21:36:43 UTC
Oh, I really liked this. :D

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smiittenz April 1 2014, 16:08:11 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

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mari4212 April 1 2014, 05:58:45 UTC
This is gorgeous. I love the tenderness you wrote between Aliyah and her son.

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smiittenz April 1 2014, 16:08:59 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! :)

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surpanakhalives April 1 2014, 12:10:56 UTC
This is beautiful!

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smiittenz April 1 2014, 16:09:48 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my work. :)

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eternal_ot April 1 2014, 14:59:58 UTC
Wow! captured the scene perfectly..well done!

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smiittenz April 1 2014, 16:10:41 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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beautyofgrey April 1 2014, 18:50:53 UTC
Awh, this is so very sweet. <3

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smiittenz April 8 2014, 05:48:14 UTC
Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed it!

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