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Let It Come Down 3/6

Jun 14, 2011 12:52

Title: Let It Come Down
Chapter: 3/6
Rating: R
Character: Puck/Rachel
Summary: She doesn't mean to linger, but it happens because he seems relaxed and less tense than he has since she saw him yesterday, and if that's the case and her little peck on the cheek has something to do with it, she wants him to be able to feel it as long as ( Read more... )

fanfic: puck/rachel, character: rachel berry, character: puck, let it come down

Comments 14

fated_addiction June 14 2011, 17:13:02 UTC

I've been sort of lurking, slash being ridiculously shy - but this story (as are all of your stories) is just so good. You take wonderful care of these characters and the flow is so seamless. I think you've managed to single-handedly convince me to ship Rachel/Puck.

Really, really wonderful job.

cookiesmonsters June 14 2011, 17:47:43 UTC

GOOD GOD. That's all I got so far but I'll be back with something more coherent.

pristhebest June 14 2011, 20:01:33 UTC

While I'm thrilled you updated (I've been lurking around hoping and praying it'd happen soon), I'm also partially upset that we're halfway through with this story. I don't want it to end!

hiddenmoonlyt June 14 2011, 20:13:54 UTC

This story is amazing... I'm dying for your next chapter~! lol

comeundone June 14 2011, 21:14:21 UTC

This is really good. It's capturing both their feelings on this situation and towards each other perfectly. It's so easy to sugar coat feeling on cheating with someone but you don't. Puck feels like an asshole but at the same time he knows he hasn't felt as good as he does when he's with Rachel in a long time. I can't wait to read the rest. :)