Let It Come Down 2/6

[smc_27]

Title: Let It Come Down
Chapter: 2/6
Rating: R
Character: Puck/Rachel
Summary: She doesn't mean to linger, but it happens because he seems relaxed and less tense than he has since she saw him yesterday, and if that's the case and her little peck on the cheek has something to do with it, she wants him to be able to feel it as long as possible.

Comments

[marydphresh]

I've always hated Quinn.

Rachel and Noah need to happen. They're just so precious. And Rachel would never be crazy with Puck's mom and storm out like that.

Rachel and Noah <3

[nova802]

Wow. Good stuff. I really feel for everyone here. (Which means you've made me feel sorry for Quinn, something I would have said was an impossibility.) A lot of marriages crumble under the weight of losing a child and I'm not getting the sense that Puck and Quinn have a lot of connections to fall back on. I'm glad Puck has Rachel to begin to open up to and in a sense, it's good that she's an outsider because it means that he can talk to her in a way that he probably can't with his mother or sister who are dealing with their own grief. I'm also glad you've kept the antipathy between Rachel and Quinn--just a personal quirk, I have a hard time buying them as anything like friends. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next.

[bsbfan2009]

love this. but rachel and puck nneed to happen and puck needs to divorce quinn. update soon please.

[x_katylou_x]

Oh Puck my heart is breaking for you. :(

This is so well written and tender.

Katy x

[lunamystik]

I like how you're establishing their lives separate from each other. I like that Puck is all about Quinn and surviving their loss right now, and Rachel is all about work, but that they'll take time out of their schedules to meet up and text. I'm now wondering how you're going to have them go to the next level, and what the emotional repercussions will be.