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smc_27

Like Passing Notes in Secrecy 5/13

Jan 11, 2011 11:41

Title: Like Passing Notes in Secrecy
Chapter: 5/13
Rating: R
Character: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He's never really missed a girl before. He never cared enough, really, to miss anyone.
Word Count: 2,800
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( Bad choices are, unfortunately, kind of her forte. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, character: rachel berry, character: puck, like passing notes in secrecy

Comments 21

thebigdisaster January 11 2011, 16:57:48 UTC

EEPP!!! This was epic awesomesauce!!!!!!!!!!!

smc_27 January 12 2011, 20:01:55 UTC

Thank you! :)

cookiesmonsters January 11 2011, 17:09:29 UTC

lol I love stories where one of them meets someone else and we have to see the other squirm and be all jealous over it. Seriously though, a teacher? Rachel, you're so awesome. I love that even Puck never scored a hot slightly older teacher and he's the one that's been visiting Cougar town more than anyone. I'm dying to know where their next little endeavor will head to.

smc_27 January 12 2011, 20:03:54 UTC

Thank you! They're not going to get it together right away, because they're both in different places and they think it can't work. You know they're both going to try to be with other people.

druidspell January 11 2011, 17:36:13 UTC

Love love love love love. The last three lines just... yeah.

smc_27 January 12 2011, 20:04:51 UTC

Thank you! :)

nicalyse January 11 2011, 17:54:20 UTC

I'm generally completely squicked out by student-teacher relationship plots (I'm a high school teacher by training, and I totally can't get past how weird and wrong it is), but it works here in a way that I don't find creepy - so yay! Part of that is likely because it's less off-putting when both characters are adults, but still.

One of my favorite things is when characters lie to themselves in their internal monologue, like Puck's insecurity "totally coming from the alcohol." So few authors take advantage of it, and it is most definitely something that people do.

smc_27 January 12 2011, 20:06:30 UTC

I get being squicked by the student/teacher thing. Sometimes it can be hot, sometimes it can be creepy. It definitely makes a difference when it's two adults and not, like, Sue/Finn or something like that. (Ew.)

I like that you catch the little details like that! Thank you! :)

comeundone January 11 2011, 20:12:34 UTC

I loved the way you wrote Dan and Rachel's short but albeit, relationship. I liked how he knew there was another guy and how Puck and Rachel are at the point where they can't even date other people because they still feel tied down to eachother in a way. I love love love where this is going and can't wait for the next bit.

smc_27 January 12 2011, 20:07:41 UTC

Thanks! I know people tend to get frustrated when PR aren't just magically together right away, so thanks for the patience and for recognizing that they each need to do their own thing and realize it gradually!