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Like Passing Notes in Secrecy 2/13

Jan 03, 2011 11:37

Title: Like Passing Notes in Secrecy
Chapter: 2/13
Rating: R
Character: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He's never really missed a girl before. He never cared enough, really, to miss anyone.
Word Count: 2,750
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( You have pretty hair. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, character: rachel berry, character: puck, like passing notes in secrecy

Comments 24

comeundone January 3 2011, 16:59:28 UTC

Aw! She came home! This is so lovely.

smc_27 January 6 2011, 04:03:32 UTC

Thank you :)

cookiesmonsters January 3 2011, 17:05:28 UTC

I love how Rachel keeps mentioning how selfish she's being by wanting him at certain times but I think this chap showed just how selfless she actually is when it comes to him. Love their relationship so much. Everything was so much more intimate in this chap, it was so beautiful. Can't wait for more.

smc_27 January 6 2011, 04:04:12 UTC

Thank you! She definitely thinks she's selfish, but she kind of proves otherwise when it counts.

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smc_27 January 6 2011, 04:04:36 UTC

Aww! :) Thank you for commenting.

nicalyse January 3 2011, 18:46:38 UTC

I kind of hate reading WIPs. I'm incredibly impatient, but I guess I'm just going to have to suck it up.

The intimacy and subtlety here is lovely. I'm really looking forward to the progression of the story.

smc_27 January 6 2011, 04:05:18 UTC

I'm impatient, too. But I'm so glad you're reading this. Thanks for commenting, too.

Also, I'm going to add you as a friend. Hope that's okay!

nicalyse January 6 2011, 18:54:54 UTC

Perfectly okay, especially since I already added you so I can watch for updates. ;)

countrygirl_914 January 3 2011, 19:13:58 UTC

<33333333

I don't know what else to say. Beautiful.

smc_27 January 6 2011, 04:05:54 UTC

Thanks, my dear. :)