Every Time You Shine, I'll Shine For You

[smc_27]

Title: Every Time You Shine, I'll Shine For You
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: Spoilers for Never Been Kissed. NC-17-ish
Pairing: Finn/Rachel
Summary: He lasts until they're in her room before he touches her. Which is actually kind of, like, a miracle or something.
Word Count: 5,270
Disclaimer: Don't own.
A/N: I can't remember who it was (sorry!) but someone

Comments

[becca_radcgg]

♥

Awesome. A bright spot in an otherwise not so bright day.

[beta_goddess]

Madly hot and adorable. Love!

[ch_leesha]

He doesn't really know what she wants to do, but if it involves her sitting on him and taking his pants off, he's really not gonna stop her.

This is seriously just what I needed after last nights episode. You pretty much hit everything spot on as I would imagine it. You capture Finn's voice so well! Rachel covering her eyes when Finn sang to her was the most adorable thing I've ever seen and I totally smiled super big again when I got to that part :)

Lovely, lovely job!

[beeeez]

This is so great. Freaking fantastically written. Love!!

[skla199]

Um, wow. I think I like your doesn't quite know what he's doing Finn over your sex god Puck. The sweetness and innocence battling with his boyish lust is really a heady mix.

How (or why) Rachel stays clothed around this boy is beyond me, but I love the little seduction dance between them. They're inexperience is sexy in it's own right.

So, yeah, kind of loved this.

[skla199]

^Good lord. Their. I obviously need coffee.