Comments | smc_27: read my lips carefully

smc_27

read my lips carefully

Jul 22, 2010 20:28

Title: read my lips carefully
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: Because there's no way Puck didn't notice Rachel's makeover during Hairography.
Word Count: 3,940
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( Puck appreciates women. )

fanfic: puck/rachel

Comments 40

80ssluvrgirl July 23 2010, 01:26:05 UTC

That was amazing. I wish that Hairography had ended that way. Though the line "You look like a sad, clown hooker," is hilarious, I would have preferred Puck blowing off Quinn in favor of Rachel.

smc_27 July 25 2010, 21:39:32 UTC

Thanks for commenting! And yeah, Finn's comment was funny in a 'oh, poor Rachel, but I love Finn and his cluelessness' way. She did look kind of ridiculous, but he was a bit of a jerk. Puck would have been allll about those tight pants! :P

gomez23 July 23 2010, 01:29:12 UTC

That was fantastic. There is no way Puck wouldn't have noticed Rachel dressed like that on the show. That was so out of character for him.

Thanks for writing a what-should-have-happened for this part of the show. You rock!

malloryg July 23 2010, 14:33:35 UTC

i love your icon! Ryan and Colin ROCK! :D

smc_27 July 25 2010, 21:40:05 UTC

Thanks so much! Yeah, he definitely would have said something. Silly show.

kimmy_77 July 23 2010, 01:30:34 UTC

SWEET! Loved this!

Cause really, Puck totally woulda been all up in that. Forget Finn, sex it up for Puck!

:D

smc_27 July 25 2010, 21:41:19 UTC

Honestly...If you're gonna sex up your look, you wanna make sure you're doing it for someone who knows how to take care of you, if you know what I mean. :P And yeah, Puck wouldn't have just left that alone. He would have been trying to get under her skirt for sure.

Thanks for commenting!

urkonstantine23 July 23 2010, 01:42:12 UTC

I love this. This is the way it should've been. Not some loser telling her she looks like a sad hooker clown. (seriously, wtf!)

This was soo perfect. This is now my canon.

smc_27 July 25 2010, 21:45:33 UTC

Finn was a bit of a jerk. Puck would have loved those tight pants, and probably would have asked her how hard they'd be to get out of. And, to be honest, he would have tried to test that theory. Thanks for the comment, darlin'.

urkonstantine23 July 25 2010, 21:58:05 UTC

I think Finn is a bit of a jerk, tbh. I'm not really a fan anymore, but I don't dislike him either. (Kurt, I dislike.) And he is definitely a jerk to Rachel in more than one way, especially telling she looks like a sad clown hooker and then a few episodes later when he said she was a hot slutty singer or whatever... you don't love a girl you refer to as slutty.

BUT ANYWAY. Haha. Tight pants and peeling them off her would probably be one of Puck's greatest fantasies brought to life. ;)

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smc_27 July 25 2010, 21:46:08 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it!