i'm tired of using technology

[smc_27]

Title: i'm tired of using technology
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: It starts with Facebook. Fictable prompt #37 - Technology
Word Count: 5,800
Disclaimer: Don't own.

Comments

[shatteredjewels]

So there is one massive, glaring problem with this fic.

It's summer, and it's hot out, and guess what? Unlike Rachel Berry, I don't have a super sexy Puck to leave messages on my Facebook to make summer worth it! SO NOT FAIR!!!

That being said, I really liked this. It was cute and fun, and the progression was very believable, because yeah. It's all little moments that build to an awesome ending, and very much something I coule see playing out in real life.

And heh, your Rachel and Puck seem to have a thing for strawberries. First, it was strawberry lip gloss and wine, and now we've moved onto milkshakes, lol.

So, lovely as always, and it's so nice to see your work up again! And... well... hopefully, with the influx of fics again, Bodyguard!Puck will be making an appearance. Seriously, that's my summer blockbuster, I've been waiting on it!

Luv ya!

[smc_27]

I know, right? Life isn't fair. I need a Puck, too.

I'm glad you thought the progression was good. Sometimes it's tough in oneshots, especially short ones.

I just picture both of them liking strawberries. Maybe I'm crazy? :P

Bodyguard!Puck isn't really playing nice. I'm trying to whip him into shape, though.

Thanks for the comment!

[j3sus_bl00d939]

BLESS YOUR HEART. Loved this. I totally agree with someone up there that asked why Rachel doesn't use FB in canon. It'd be hilarious to see the characters using FB for different things on the show. Puck liking really dirty or stupid pages ( Noah Puckerman likes: your butt). Finn wouldn't even use FB right i bet you and accidently like people's statuses creepily.

But i digress

This was wonderful and I'm glad that even though I won't get any p/r on my screen all season I still have awesome writers like you that write fics like these to ease the pain. once again-bless your heart.

[smc_27]

Thanks!! Rachel should totally have a Facebook, and Puck should totally be her friend and like, casually look at all her shit. Hahah! Finn would totally creep and not even realize.

Glad you liked it!

[if_musicbe]

Despite the fact that any mention of Finn and Quinn ever getting back together always triggers my gag reflex, like everything you've ever written, I loved this. The emoticons and tiny shorts and the blatant demonstration of how plugged in we all are that makes this understandable to us but probably incomprehensible to my mother, were she to read this. I'm really loving this whole fictable thing all you talented writers are doing and as always I love your Noah and Rachel.

[smc_27]

Glad you liked this one! I am really having a lot of fun with this fictable. Thanks for commenting!

[thebigdisaster]

Oh em gee!!! This was hella awesome.

[smc_27]

Thanks!! :)

[ellashy]

LOVED it ALL....

"popped ur facebook cherry" that was just brilliant hehe

[smc_27]

Hee! Thanks, bb!