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smc_27

Dominated Hand [9/10]

Jun 05, 2010 15:28

Title: Dominated Hand
Chapter: 9/10
Warning: NC-17
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He doesn't expect Rachel to be good at poker, and there's no way he's going to let her beat him. Turns out that when the stakes are high, Puck comes to play. "Whoever loses has to be the other's slave."
Word Count: 5,320
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fanfic: puck/rachel, dominated hand

Comments 34

comeundone June 5 2010, 22:44:28 UTC

I FEEL LKE THE LUCKIEST GIRL RN. I just read your late update on ff and then checked my livejournal and BAM. I love you.

comeundone June 6 2010, 00:02:41 UTC

I loved this. Puck and Rachel are so cute and I love Puck's interactions with his mom. Pretty cute. They are so couplely and they don't even realize it.

smc_27 June 7 2010, 01:16:29 UTC

Thanks so much! I don't know why I always end up working Puck's mom into the story...it just happens! Glad you like it! :)

snoozin81 June 5 2010, 23:04:20 UTC

You're a tease...lol. What an awful cliff hanger but you were right the Santana/Puck phone call was hilar only it's left me wanting the Santana/Puck/Rachel threesome, seriously I love the way you've worked these three into the story and melded them together. It's completely golden. Also the Matt/Puck friendship, bonding over the baseball game was great too.

I am however saddened that there's only one chapter left and as much as I want to read it I kind of don't want it to end either...lol.

smc_27 June 7 2010, 01:17:46 UTC

Tease? Me? ;) At least I update fast and the last chapter is already posted :P I can't leave the readers hanging too long! The Santana/Rachel/Puck friendship is pretty hilarious, if I do say so myself. And I always love romances. Always.

The last chapter is up now! :) Thanks for commenting.

lunamystik June 5 2010, 23:06:50 UTC

Love the buildup here, in the penultimate chapter. It's nothing but tension, basically. Love Aviva here, but mostly it's all about Puck and his ball game, basically. I can soooo imagine where Rachel is right now, mentally. I've been there before...

smc_27 June 7 2010, 01:19:01 UTC

You know me. Aviva always has to make a little appearance, and I have no idea why. It just kind of happens. I don't fight it. :P

Frustrated!Rachel is frustrated. Won't stay that way for long, though. ;)

geniusgirl June 6 2010, 00:10:43 UTC

1. If you write Puck/Rachel/Santana threesome fic, I will personally alert the Vatican that hey, they totally forgot that Jesus had a sister and she is awesome. (This is me kind of begging XD)

2. Amazing story, as always. I've been reading from the beginning but this chapter just built up so much tension, I absolutely can't wait. I felt a little encouragement was necessary.

I adore this beyond. Lovely, lovely writing. What else can I expect when it's yours?

smc_27 June 7 2010, 01:20:39 UTC

1. I don't know if I will write that fic. Everyone seems to want it, but I don't know. And I don't know how much the Vatican would love the idea of underage, unwed, dirty sex. Just sayin'. :P

2. Thank you so much! I really appreciate the comments :)

fuzzy_paint June 6 2010, 00:14:36 UTC

I've been super behind on reading and commenting on your stuff - dude, I can barely keep up with you - so I apologize for that. Anyway. How much am I enjoying this series? A LOT, let me tell you. I love the buildup of the entire thing (and look at me, reading before we actually get to the REALLY good part lol me and my smut) and the tension between them.

Can't wait until the next part!

♥

smc_27 June 7 2010, 01:22:23 UTC

I know, I know. I write too much. It's a problem. I think I need rehab. Loljk. I wouldn't last a day.

I'm so glad you like this! It's been basically 9 chapters of pure tension, and the last chapter is when it all comes to a head. Pun...? Perhaps. ;)

Thanks for commenting, bb! Hope you like the last chapter, too!