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smc_27

Stay A Little Longer

Apr 23, 2010 11:55

Title: Stay A Little Longer
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: I guess you could say this is speculation for a back 9 (or should I say back 7?) event. This one's not related to the other fictable stories.
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: Fictable prompt #13 - Death.
Word Count: 3,610
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( This is bigger than a broken heart or a sore wrist or a little blood. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, fictable

Comments 20

mvp April 24 2010, 00:37:45 UTC

I love love love this story everyone has reviewed more eloquently than i ever could so ill just say that this needs to have a sequel and/or a lot of chapters that follows it really!!

smc_27 April 24 2010, 21:27:32 UTC

Thanks so much! Who knows? Maybe one of the other fictable prompts will connect to this in some way.

I love you, smc_27's fictable lunamystik April 24 2010, 12:55:25 UTC

How did you turn Rachel into exactly the person Puck needed? This was just a perfect example of someone reading and knowing another so well, and understanding exactly what he needed as comfort.

Re: I love you, smc_27's fictable smc_27 April 24 2010, 21:28:29 UTC

Thanks so much!! Yes, I like to think that despite Rachel's occasional selfishness, she really does understand other people pretty well and know how to help them when they need it. But then again, I just love that girl so much...

mancrave April 24 2010, 15:53:10 UTC

Aww bless, this is so sweet. But what is this about potential spoilers? I'm in the UK so I haven't even seen 1x15 yet and I've been avoiding any other spoilers I can but I can't help but read your stuff as soon as you post something new! So Puck is getting some bad news? Oh dear. If only Rachel is there to save him in the show too.

This is beautifully done, he is still so Puck but he is Noah too, if that makes sense. I love it. *g*

smc_27 April 24 2010, 21:30:05 UTC

I try really, really hard to stay unspoiled for Glee. Sometimes I accidentally overhear or read things. It's kind of annoying. But yeah, apparently something 'tragic' is happening to Puck. No one knows what it is, but I really hope it's this and not something worse. I hope Rachel will be there for him in some way.

Thanks for the comment!

7gifts April 26 2010, 00:16:20 UTC

Now this is absolutely adorable.

smc_27 April 26 2010, 18:37:11 UTC

Thank you so much!

kimmy_77 April 27 2010, 18:26:41 UTC

Oh my... That was, so. Damnit, I'm crying. So yeah it was that good. Beautiful.

smc_27 April 27 2010, 21:33:38 UTC

Aww shucks. Sorry I made you cry! But I'm glad you liked it. :)