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smartasswillow

Set Fire to the Rain 9/12

Sep 25, 2011 22:47

Title: Set Fire to the Rain 9/12
Author: smartasswillow
Fandom: The Closer
Rating: M
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon

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the closer, brenda l. johnson, fanfic, sharon raydor, set fire to the rain

Comments 7

lindy999 September 27 2011, 03:08:55 UTC

Oh wow this is very powerful.

smartasswillow September 27 2011, 16:24:49 UTC

Thank you. Not many people seem to like this story and i feel a bit insecure. So I do appreciate your comments!

lindy999 September 27 2011, 16:26:38 UTC

Really, well I do like it and am looking forward to the next chapters. It's definitely different, but I like different.

smartasswillow September 27 2011, 18:07:57 UTC

Thank you, I'm really happy that you like it! And I'm happy to be/write different (or differently? English grammar will be the death of me).

capa_06 September 27 2011, 17:42:06 UTC

Love this chapter...so much angst for both of them :D
Poor Sharon, she's hurting so much without Brenda even noticing...she really has a lot to make up for ^^
And I just noticed how well you write these two, their reactions just fit =)

BTW I have a theory why you wouldn't get so many comments. Maybe it's because you already said, that the story is complete and so nobody would feel the need to comment...cuz I can't imagine that just so few people like this great story...
But that's just me thinking aloud... ;)

smartasswillow September 27 2011, 18:03:39 UTC

If I will ever write another long story I'll blackmail my readers:)
I think I put a little of me in both of them, but I tried to stay in character as much as I could. And it's hard if they live in another continent, have almost two times your age and speak another language:) But that's also why it was so much fun!

Maybe I can be mean and not post the last 3 chapters for a while... mmm I'll think about it...

capa_06 September 27 2011, 20:25:03 UTC

NOPE not a good idea...seriously, not at all ^^ =P
So no being mean...pretty please!!! :D

But I can imagine that it's hard to stay in character all the time and in a different language nonetheless (I'm neither a native English speaker)...I tried to write some stuff for SVU but never got beyond the drabbles.