Comments | smallwaldo: Underneath It All (SGA: Sheppard/Beckett)

smallwaldo

Underneath It All (SGA: Sheppard/Beckett)

Feb 14, 2007 17:14

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Comments 17

amokeh February 15 2007, 02:52:47 UTC

Oh. My. That was seriously, frickin' HOT!! And...I don't even *like* the whole men-wearing-panties thing! But this was insanely hot. And Carson as dominant, calling the shots? Oh, momma! LOL!! ::fanning chest:: Thank you for this - I'm going to have lovely dreams tonight. ;)

smallwaldo February 15 2007, 03:21:37 UTC

Well, aren't we the mutual admiration society tonight. :) Hee!

Glad you liked this. At first I was all, "I have to write crossdressing???!!1!!11 OMG!!1!!1" But then I realized that if I didn't have to take it too far... it could be a little fun. ;)

Pleasant dreams. I should be heading for bed myself. :)

charlies_dragon February 15 2007, 03:55:37 UTC

OH MY!!!

Sheesh, I definately need a very cold shower having read this - tis extremely HOT m'dear. Thank-you so much for sharing this kinky piece with us :D

charlies_dragon

smallwaldo February 17 2007, 13:53:57 UTC

Hee! :) So glad it worked for you. At first I was all "WTF? I have to write WHAT?" and then I went... hm... okay, I can do this." But I didn't expect so many people to really get into it. That's been a kick.

Thanks!

charlies_dragon February 17 2007, 16:59:04 UTC

Well it just goes to show how good a writer you are if you can write something that makes you respnd like that initially :D

charlies_dragon

smallwaldo February 17 2007, 17:37:54 UTC

Aw thanks, that's very sweet! :)

Underneath It All slashpuppy February 15 2007, 04:35:54 UTC

Good story, I like the idea of Carson teasing John.

:-)

Re: Underneath It All smallwaldo February 17 2007, 13:54:39 UTC

I'm sure Carson considers it a matter of self-defense. Tease or be teased. Better stand your own. :)

Glad you liked it. :)

yellowvalley February 15 2007, 06:19:29 UTC

O.M.G. That was hot. I'm like, salivating over here.

This is not my kink, but the way you wrote it? Holy Hell.

John's tension/anticipation all day was fabulous. And for some reason Carson pushing John along with a hand between his shoulder blades totally hit my buttons. Just a small sentence in this fic, but I loved it.

smallwaldo February 17 2007, 13:56:37 UTC

LOL! Honestly, it's not my kink either. It was assigned to me. And at first, I totally panicked. :)

Carson pushing John along with a hand between his shoulder blades totally hit my buttons.

Interesting! Pushy Carson can be fun. I know a lot of people write him as wimpy, but he's really not.

So glad you liked the fic. It was more fun to write than I thought it would be. :)

victoriaely February 15 2007, 09:10:39 UTC

*grins evilly*
I forgot you haven't posted this :)
Great valentine's day fic

smallwaldo February 17 2007, 13:57:37 UTC

Yeah, I had to wait for the reveal over at kinkofthemonth. And yeah, it did seem to fit the mood, didn't it? ;)