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Fic: Dancing Lessons

Feb 20, 2009 01:40

Title: Dance Lessons
Author: svgurl
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Oliver
Rating: G
Word Count: 482
Summary: Clark and Ollie take dance lessons.
Spoilers: none
Prompt: Feb 20 | waltz | Team Clark

( Fic )

[pairing] - clark/oliver, [character] - oliver queen/green arrow, [prompt] - valentine day, [pairing] - collie, [fanfic] - valentine day, [character] - clark kent/boyscout/superm, [rating] - pg

Comments 14

chaotic4life February 20 2009, 11:17:13 UTC

Awwww ♥
That's so adorable and I can completely see this play out in my mind. Love your characterizations in this.

svgurl February 20 2009, 19:19:23 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And yay! Characterization is important to me so I am really relieved it worked for you! :D

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! :)

saavikam77 February 20 2009, 15:40:18 UTC

Awwwww!!! ^_^ *grins like a loon* Gods, this was perfectly romantic and sweet. I so love Ollie reassuring Clark that he wouldn't break him. Silly Clark. :p

&hearts

svgurl February 20 2009, 19:20:21 UTC

Sometimes I like to write a bit of fluff. And Ollie would be all reassuring ... he's good for Clark that way. ;D

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! &hearts :)

pippii February 20 2009, 18:14:04 UTC

That was so sweet♥

svgurl February 20 2009, 19:20:46 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment! :)

mitsuki_shizuka February 20 2009, 21:15:14 UTC

Aww I absolutely loved this! You always manage to write those two so perfectly well together, it always gets me! Seriously, great job, really :D

svgurl February 20 2009, 22:08:18 UTC

I am really glad to hear that! And that's really sweet of you to say ... it makes me happy to know you think I get their characters right! :D

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! :)

quiet__tiger February 20 2009, 23:56:20 UTC

Clark definitely needs dancing lessons. He has to do something about those two left feet. I wonder who's leading the dance, though... Something tells me Oliver.

instead, he was taken by surprise when he was suddenly pulled closer.

Lifting his head, green eyes met brown and he realized that they were only centimeters apart.

That's hot.

Cute fic!

svgurl February 21 2009, 00:33:34 UTC

I would think so! And yes, Ollie is definitely leading. ;D

instead, he was taken by surprise when he was suddenly pulled closer.

Lifting his head, green eyes met brown and he realized that they were only centimeters apart.

That's hot.

And I'm so glad that part worked for you. We both know I'm better with the fluff than anything steamy so your comment makes me happy!

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D