Comments | smacky30: CM Fic - It's Not a Party

smacky30

CM Fic - It's Not a Party

Jul 05, 2010 08:57

Title: It's Not a Party
Author: smacky30
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Rossi/Prentiss
Summary: Written for the cmrossiprentiss Family Picnic Summer 2010 ficathon. My prompt was Dave and Emily's son. Dave and Emily have a cookout/pool party for the team. A water fight ensues.

Disclaimer: Not mine.

A/N: Many thanks and cookies and SF pie to mingsmommy and losingntrnslatn for their beta ( Read more... )

frt, criminal minds, rossi/prentiss

Comments 20

failegaidin July 5 2010, 16:38:08 UTC

This was hilarious! So in character and so much fun :)

smacky30 July 5 2010, 16:39:31 UTC

Thanks so much. It was fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it.

zamboni12 July 5 2010, 19:08:08 UTC

hahahah I love it from the first line to the last. And the last line is sooo promising.

Awww, sweet Joseph Anthony with missing front teeth. I can almost see him before me :-)

Very funny and refreshing!

smacky30 July 5 2010, 19:34:12 UTC

Thanks so much. I felt really bad because you guys worked so hard and wrote such long, lovely stories and I gave you this. So I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. :D

microgirl8225 July 5 2010, 20:44:20 UTC

This was seriously, SERIOUSLY adorable. I just loved it. Joey Rossi is so cute, and I want to read more about his adventures with Henry. They seemed like they would be best buds. And the last line was great. Pure David.

Thank you for participating! Great job :)

smacky30 July 5 2010, 20:53:50 UTC

Thanks so much. I actually had fun with this. Glad you liked it. :D

theras July 5 2010, 21:47:40 UTC

Adorable

smacky30 July 5 2010, 22:13:38 UTC

Thanks!

mingsmommy July 6 2010, 00:03:11 UTC

You know how adorable I think this. You have such a great grasp on the characters and Joey Rossi is one adorable kid. I love seeing the team in these lighter situations...it's good to see them having fun and laughing and playing...most adults don't play enough in my opinion.

This line is so great:

“That would explain why you were going to turn off the game.” He opens one eye, and shoots her a hurt look.

I really, truly loved the end...I love the sweet and the sexy and how much they love each other.

Great work!!

smacky30 July 6 2010, 00:58:49 UTC

Thank you. I'm starting to like Emily & Dave's kids better than I like them. ;) I - as always - appreciate all your help. MWAH!