CM Fic - In Love With the Girl - Part 5/5

[smacky30]

Title: In Love With the Girl
Author: Smacky30
Pairing: Henry/Ella, Rossi/Prentiss, Hotch/JJ, Will/JJ
Rating: FRAO
Summary: A story about falling in love. JJ & Will's son Henry is in love with Dave & Emily's daughter. This is just a look at the whole process from the time she is born.

A/N: Started at a look at Emily & Dave's reaction to their

Comments

[microgirl8225]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

I know that's lame, but that's what I got at the moment.

That was really sweet. I love that Henry went to ask Dave's permission to marry Ella, and that Dave still tried to scare him. And the proposal was just lovely. It was very thoughtful of Henry to include both families.

And of course the end was heartbreaking in a good way. I can see Dave being very torn up, but happy for his daughter.

What a lovely glimpse into the future for Dave and Emily and their daughter. This was such a great read. I definitely look forward to more of your fics.

[smacky30]

I don't think it's lame at all - thank you. I really loved writing this (even when I thought it was stupid) so I'm very glad you liked it.

[mingsmommy]

YAY! What an amazing job you did!

Dave having to "give" Ella away just about killed me. I love how you made Emily and Dave so in love and still in love, but still knowing each other. Henry and Ella were both well developed and such great characters.

You took a Universe we know and love and expanded it by years and people and so much love. You did a marvelous job! Be very proud!

[smacky30]

One day you and Keith can do that for SBH (I'm keeping the faith). And I hope I'm there to watch.

Seriously, thanks for all of it - even the parts I ignored. I couldn't do this without your support. Love you.

[alicat713]

Oh, my GOSH. Woman, you are paying for the cavities this sweet, sweet story gave me. You are amazing. This story sucked me in from start to finish and I've decided that as soon as time permits, I need to go back and read the entire thing again.

[smacky30]

You are entirely too sweet. The Ming will tell you I'm terrified of characters I don't know - so this was a true stretch for me. I appreciate all your kind comments. Thank you so much.

[innerslytherin]

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!

So sweet. And the proposal in front of the family is awesome. I love old married Dave and Emily too. :-D

[smacky30]

Thanks so much! I was nervous about that proposal scene because it could've become very cheesy very quickly. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And I love old married D&E too.

[zamboni12]

Oh my! This is so wonderful and romantic. I had tears in my eyes reading how Henry proposes to Ella. I almost felt Dave´s "pain" to see his "little girl" is going to be another mans "girl".
This story is a keeper and gets a special place in my top-stories-list.
Be proud of you, you did a fantastic job!

[smacky30]

Thank you so much. I love these characters and am glad that other people like them too. I really appreciate you sticking with it and leaving such wonderful comments.

Hugs