and it wrung me out and strung me out

[smackalalala]

I have 2 short poems for you all. I wrote these last night but wasn't in a posting mood because I had made a post and no one seemed to be around, so...

But enough of me being whiny. The first poem is a haiku and the second is just...short.

Comments

[odakota_rose]

I really liked the imagery on the first one, I could see it in my head.
The second one was just as nice, it felt like a lot of emotion in a little poem, which I always like.

[smackalalala]

Thank you! The second one is quite a bit different than what I normally write, so it's nice to get some variety going on every once in awhile. :)