I am happy I did a random check to see if this had been updated. Good grief, I want Remus and Harry to get it on so badly it hurts! The build up is half the fun and makes for an amazing story, but I am sitting on nails waiting.
I love your writing style. It flows neatly, and it is easy to feel the emotions coming off the characters. I have to say that Harry's pondering how a relationship between two men gets started was one of my favorite parts. As a bisexual, I have had that moment were I have met a woman I liked and kinda wondered. You nailed the emotion perfectly.
Of course, it is your great writing that makes me look forward to something more happening between them. I know it will be good. Congrats on a job well done.
What a nice thing to wake up to. ^-^ Thank you so much for the kind review.
I've feeling good about the next couple of chapters. I've got a rough rough draft of both. But I've been working on refining the next for a while. Got a lot of stuff going on right now at home.
A little more Remus. A litle exposition, and our first class with Prof Cobbleshot, whose kind of an odd duck to be sure. :p
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I love your writing style. It flows neatly, and it is easy to feel the emotions coming off the characters. I have to say that Harry's pondering how a relationship between two men gets started was one of my favorite parts. As a bisexual, I have had that moment were I have met a woman I liked and kinda wondered. You nailed the emotion perfectly.
Of course, it is your great writing that makes me look forward to something more happening between them. I know it will be good. Congrats on a job well done.
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I've feeling good about the next couple of chapters. I've got a rough rough draft of both. But I've been working on refining the next for a while. Got a lot of stuff going on right now at home.
A little more Remus. A litle exposition, and our first class with Prof Cobbleshot, whose kind of an odd duck to be sure. :p
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