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abarbiestory August 14 2011, 23:08:47 UTC
i haven't left a comment for a while which i apologize for. but i just wanted to say that this chapter was awesome!

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jediyoda99 August 15 2011, 00:22:31 UTC
Been waiting for an update like forever. Thank you for this. I was sure that this would be the chapter that Connor would know that Oliver Queen is his father but I am happy that they have acknowledge it to someone. The secret is out in the open and I am sure that it wont be long till the whole world would know.

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iluvaqt August 15 2011, 00:49:39 UTC
Oh wow, I didn't see that development happening, but I reminds me a little of The Game Plan. I hope that who Oliver reacted softens Connor even more toward him. Kids have very simple basic needs and when you really care for them, you support their interests and take time for them, they can help but grow attached. I wonder what he planned with Nick? Burning with curiosity. I wonder if it was an appeal to the Green Arrow that his mom was in trouble. :D And I would have loved for them to tell Adrian but the way Chloe set Bren straight was priceless and I loved it. The Chlollie moments were so sweet, I had a grin on my face the entire time and loved who all the sex and more kids finally clicked and Zatanna's prediction was mentioned :)

Been really looking forward to this update and yours never disappoint. Thank you. Hope life cuts you a bit of a break soon. Take care.

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saurina August 15 2011, 01:37:46 UTC
I'm in awe of your mad writing skills, this chapter was awesome. I love how you keep us in suspence with every new twist and turn, while slowly progressing the story. Kudos!
Ohh and the last part where connor hold on tight to Oliver was so freaking sweet..;)))

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vane_80 August 15 2011, 02:58:11 UTC
Love this chapter I can't wait to read some more

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