Comments | slybrunette: dance in the dark {grey's

slybrunette

dance in the dark {grey's - cristina; burke/cristina}

Jul 12, 2010 17:25

Title: Dance In The Dark
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Cristina. Burke/Cristina, with implied Owen/Cristina, Owen/Teddy and various other pairings.
Rating: R
Word Count: 3,149
Author's Note: For nursebadass. Sorry it's not smuttier.
Summary: Post Season Six Finale. She tells him she'll be at Joe's and that's a lie. He tells her he's just ( Read more... )

character: ga: cristina, character: ga: burke, character: ga: owen, ship: ga: burke/cristina, character: ga: alex, fandom: grey's anatomy, character: ga: lexie, !fic, character: ga: meredith

Comments 11

nursebadass July 12 2010, 21:49:16 UTC

Oh, this is just beautiful. I love how it plays off of canon, I always love how it plays off of canon. The look of Owen's surprise when his mistress shows up is clearly painted in my face. I could almost see him playing stupid with the whole thing too.

She came the first time with three fingers sliding inside of her, the second bent over the bed with his name echoing off of the walls and her fingers clawing at the sheets.

Oh God, this makes me so anxious for the porn battle. So so anxious. Can you say fuckingyumomigoshtasty? Cause I can. God, bent over the bed. Jesus.

Cristina takes a breath and one step forward and none backward.

Have I mentioned how much I love your Cristina? Like whoa. You always have her nailed and I know that the Burke insecurity but seriously- his voice is always so clear for me with you. More than that, I can see him in my head when I read your stuff. Which is always nice.

slybrunette July 12 2010, 21:54:41 UTC

It's always got to play off of canon with me, for this show anyway. It's like a disease but, hey, it's worth noting that it's pretty easy to do at this point.

The porn battle is going to be FUN. I can guarantee that. (And the funny thing is I just changed the content of that section -- the bent over the bed part was literally the last thing I wrote before I posted).

My Cristina is maybe a little more assertive than the show's at this point? I think. I'm not sure. She's a little different. The show wants her to be a slave to her relationships and that just doesn't feel natural given what we knew of her seasons ago. There's no natural progression. So, yeah.

The Burke insecurity will always be there -- but you're helping subdue it a little.

I am so ridiculously relieved that you liked this. Thanks for reading and reviewing and being uber patient with me :)

nursebadass July 12 2010, 22:10:40 UTC

LOL, that's awesome. You totally have my number. I so can't wait for this bitch to start. I'm ready for some porn battle love.

Your Cristina may be more assertive but she used to be that way and it's the way she should be. Shonda destroyed her.

And your Burke insecurity is ridiculous.

As I've said before, good things come to those who wait. I'm never disappointed.

ovariesofsteel July 13 2010, 04:56:04 UTC

Dear Shonda,

Please to hire slybrunette

Love,

ovariesofsteel

slybrunette July 14 2010, 00:27:02 UTC

LOL. I can't say that would be a job I would turn down ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

lovelylytton July 13 2010, 14:35:25 UTC

This is going in my Memories, it's just perfect.
All the layers, all the lies, all the love, and all the friendship in between the lines. I love it.

ladybeth July 16 2010, 02:03:06 UTC

Love it. And I'm glad to see Burke back again.

foibles_fables July 20 2010, 04:39:08 UTC

HOW THE FUCK DID I MISS THIS

Excellent, excellent stuff, babe. I think this needs to happen in canon. And the "I think" is really just for show. Your Cristina is always so spot-on, it amazes me. And that last line? Holy crap, perfection.

The world needs more awesome Bang, and you've certainly helped here. ♥