monogamy and the common surgeon {ga - burke/cristina}

Apr 06, 2010 16:56

Title: Monogamy And The Common Surgeon
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Cristina. Burke/Cristina; implied Owen/Cristina.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,312
Author's Note: nursebadass wanted smut, specifically Burke/Cristina, and so I tried for that. Also, this isn't really a 'let's trash 'insert name here' fic either. Promise. Even with the cheating ( Read more... )

character: ga: cristina, ship: ga: burke/cristina, character: ga: burke, fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic

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nursebadass April 6 2010, 21:10:33 UTC
Holy fuck. Okay...so, I'm just gonna start at the beginning because I don't know where else to start. I'm all over the place. I'm going to read this 18 more times at least.

It’s less of a conscious choice and more of a time management problem. She doesn’t have time to cheat. Certainly not the energy.

This is so Cristina through and through.

“Does he do this?” He murmurs into her ear, soft tones that are cut with something angry, something definitely jealous, and she won’t give him any satisfaction. She won’t give him anything about her life with Owen. When she doesn’t answer, he twists his fingers just right and pulls out too quick, the loss of sensation making her moan despite her best intentions. “Does he know what you like?”

Dude, I just lost my shit at this. The smut is so incredibly hot but this most definitely made the smut for me. Just Burke being all....Burke. I don't know, it's just so fucking good. SO GOOD.

3) She comes around Burke’s fingers, her eyes focused on Owen’s for half a second before the close and her head ( ... )

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slybrunette April 6 2010, 23:27:48 UTC
I really am so fucking beyond glad that you liked this. I can't even express that enough. Because this stuff does NOT come naturally for me AT ALL.

That "does he does this" part was written with you in mind, I'm not going to lie. I figured it would draw some sort of reaction out of you ;)

Owen, take note, this is what a real orgasm looks like. Y'know. Since you've never seen one.

LOL. ILU.

It really does have hints of that triangle doesn't it? Except for the whole smut part, lol.

I'm glad you enjoyed it hun! Thanks so much!

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nursebadass May 22 2010, 03:22:03 UTC
I didn't lie when I said I was going to read it 18 more times.

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slybrunette May 22 2010, 03:23:03 UTC
LOL.

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mrsfjl66 April 6 2010, 21:13:37 UTC
The last paragraph is killer. I know I was supposed to be paying attention to the smut but...

Well done!

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slybrunette April 6 2010, 23:29:06 UTC
Well, I can't do just plain PWP, I have to have plot somewhere, or at least character study stuff so...I'm actually kind of happy that you liked that part.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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mrsfjl66 April 7 2010, 00:09:19 UTC
I'm feeling rather protective of Cristina right now and hating the situation canon has put her in so I like that you are willing to go places other people might not be willing to (and yes, I am also referring to your other recent Cristina fic) for the sake of really exploring her character. Your fics are always true to who these characters are, and not slave to the ships they are in. I dig that. (And yes, I did actually say dig. I may or may not be channeling the 70s today;).)

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slybrunette April 7 2010, 01:08:40 UTC
I've never been someone afraid to go where canon won't. I don't confine myself to specific ships either, so saying that's something you actually like is so very encouraging. Sometimes I just feel like I'm a crazy person or something -- reading a whole different book than other people are. (And I say dig all the time, fyi, so you're not alone in that)

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lexiesloan April 6 2010, 22:46:40 UTC
Holy crap. I don't even really like any of these characters but I couldn't keep myself from reading this because you write the best characterizations of everyone on this show so I read it and HOLY CRAP! That was so fucking hot and personally, I loved that Cristina did that with Burke and Owen walked in. It should be exactly like this :)

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slybrunette April 6 2010, 23:29:48 UTC
AW. Thank you so much! I wouldn't mind too much if this actually happened, for sure.

I'm glad you enjoyed this!

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ovariesofsteel April 6 2010, 23:23:41 UTC
BURKE COME BACK, ffs.

This was lovely.

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slybrunette April 6 2010, 23:30:19 UTC
SERIOUSLY.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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ovariesofsteel April 7 2010, 00:19:38 UTC
You're welcome! Once upon a time, before my muse met some rogue male muse from the other side of the tracks and ran away, I used to thrive on feedback!!

<3

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slybrunette April 7 2010, 01:05:16 UTC
LOL. Well, I hope your muse breaks up with him soon and comes back to you. And I do appreciate it :)

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slybrunette April 6 2010, 23:35:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you thought so!

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