and back to you {derek/mark}

Sep 29, 2009 17:03

Title: And Back To You
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Mark/Derek. Strong implications of Mark/Lexie and Derek/Meredith.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,121
Prompt: #75 - News for 100_situations
Author's Note: Written for hesperia. Sorry your color prompt is absent, but I ran with the novel title, let me tell you. Also, I'm not entirely sure how I feel about ( Read more... )

character: ga: derek, fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic, table: 100_situations, character: ga: mark, ship: ga: derek/mark

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mrsfjl66 September 29 2009, 23:57:08 UTC
I do not generally dig this pairing but this was a huge YES for me. It felt complete and satisfying. Like canon used to be :)

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slybrunette September 30 2009, 01:22:00 UTC
Well, thank you for taking a chance on this then! I'm so glad that you were pleased with it :)

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workswithwords September 30 2009, 02:03:21 UTC
THIS reminds me why I love Grey's Anatomy. Because there are people like you who can turn four words into something so real, and so completely in tune with the characters.

Your Mark is as always, spot on. I love the way he is with Derek, how there is years of life to them, how the history they have works with who you've made them.

And the subtly of them in a relationship or whatever you want to call it, it was so well thought out, so perfect, just there underneath the surface that it doesn't even have to be pointed out, it's just there and we're all very much okay with it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you, from the bottom of my heart!

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slybrunette September 30 2009, 02:07:30 UTC
Your prompt threw me initially -- and yet I came up with this totally weird idea and just...went with it. It wasn't easy, and it wasn't my best, but I definitely gave it a go, and hearing that you liked this makes it all worth it.

Thanks so much hun!

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crickets September 30 2009, 02:07:53 UTC
I liked this whole scenario how it focused on the one case and the way these two just play off each other and are there for each other. Very nice way to show that. And then of course that last scene which was kind of unexpected in the way you wrote it. I loved this: Derek really is the longest relationship he’s ever had, just not in the same way that people would assume. Which is completely canonically true, even if not in this way. (That we KNOW of.) Hehe.

And I gotta say every freaking time you write Cristina, even when she's barely in a scene like this. It's total perfection.

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slybrunette September 30 2009, 02:14:38 UTC
It's a bit rushed isn't it? I don't know, I had a plan and it all went to shit, so there's that.

As for Cristina, she's one of my favorites to write, so thank you! I'm glad you liked this!

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holycitygirl September 30 2009, 02:41:51 UTC
“Still be worth it,” he adds, and he isn’t really talking about the sleeping pills; he hopes Derek gets that. They’ve been them for too long now for him to not get it.

Love this. Of course. Love YOU. Guh. It just makes me miss and want to write these angsty perfect boys again. Awesome job, love.

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slybrunette September 30 2009, 02:52:20 UTC
YES. WRITE. PLZ.

Seriously though, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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citron_presse September 30 2009, 03:22:45 UTC
I absolutely loved this. I've come to adore this pairing and you write them exceptionally.

There’s a part of him that’s slowly getting used to definitions. I like this line so much - it seems a very deflected way of saying something so much more, and so much better for being deflected!

But then the entire fic is subtle, plausible, in character and just really great. Thank you!

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slybrunette October 1 2009, 03:15:41 UTC
Yeah, that line has a lot of meaning there. I think Mark, to a degree, has changed with this whole Lexie thing. And I kind of wanted to reflect that.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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