the lonestar excursion {sheldon/penny}

Sep 24, 2009 09:35

Title: The Lonestar Excursion
Fandom: The Big Bang Theory
Characters/Pairings: Sheldon/Penny
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,736
Author's Note: I owe the idea behind this to bebitched. And no, I usually don't play in the world of AU, even if it's simple like this.
Spoilers: 3.01 - The Electric Can Opener Fluctation.
Summary: Completely AU for 3.01. Her ( Read more... )

character: tbbt: penny, ship: tbbt: sheldon/penny, fandom: the big bang theory, !fic, character: tbbt: sheldon

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babebubeboink99 September 24 2009, 14:14:40 UTC
Aw poor Penny. Dazed and confused. From defeat and pain comes art and beauty. Thanks for this.

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slybrunette September 24 2009, 14:48:48 UTC
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked this!

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montycrowley September 24 2009, 14:48:20 UTC
What a nice fic! Well written and sophisticated, good use of language, and a good kiss scene - those can be so difficult. A pleasure to read - thank you very much!

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slybrunette September 24 2009, 14:49:49 UTC
They definitely can, and in this case are, difficult to write. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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babebubeboink99 September 24 2009, 23:41:14 UTC
Now I kinda want you to write an amnesia fic, with Sheldon being stripped of all his OCD to reveal the ideal man underneath. :D

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slybrunette September 24 2009, 14:52:03 UTC
Seriously, come on people, we all know it should've been Penny who went to get him. Obviously. *is in denial* I definitely did try to balance it out with similiar dialogue and details that were in the episode because I'm a canon writer by nature and needed a jumping off point -- and I prefer this version of events.

I'm so glad that you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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rj_anderson September 24 2009, 16:17:21 UTC
I've been so crazy busy these last few weeks that I've hardly read any fanfic, and I don't usually read AU's anyway, but I made an exception for this one because the summary looked promising and I'm so glad I did! Excellent work. \0/

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slybrunette September 24 2009, 16:19:45 UTC
I never write AU's -- I'm too in love with canon -- but I had to rewrite Monday's episode. There was too much opportunity.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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fujiidom September 24 2009, 16:19:02 UTC
“Kill the mood? You know when a person…” and she can already see where this is going to go, “never mind. Language barrier.”

HEEE. THIS.

His voice is marginally less condescending, back to the softer, kinder Sheldon that shows up for about ten minutes once a month.

AND GUHH. Yes. All of this was terrific. Somehow, no matter how AU this might be there's so much realness to it. The motivations and emotions were all very clear in that episode, this is just a wonderful delineation from where they went! I don't know if you plan to do more (since it's vaguely open-ended) but that'd certainly be intriguing! Either way, awesome!

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slybrunette September 24 2009, 16:22:45 UTC
I actually probably won't do more in this verse but, you know, it's open-ended just in case. Who knows what I'll get an idea for.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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fujiidom September 24 2009, 16:28:51 UTC
Gotcha. Like, I said, I like that too! It's very casual and light even when dealing with Sheldon being so gloomy! Such a fun read. :)

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