Title: Where You Go When The Lights Are Turned Down Low
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Alex, Cristina.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 981
Prompt: #3 - Forget for
5drunkficsAuthor's Note:
bebitched wanted Grey's fic with two people drinking...in a morgue. And thus this was born.
Summary: Post S5 finale. Alex has never been down here before.
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loose ends tangle down and then take flight )
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Anyways, perfect dialogue. I know I always say it, but you just do it so well; it's the sheer brutality of what they're saying, and the fact that neither is going to call the other one on it. "Write it on a fucking post-it." is just the kind of line that would earn him a shocked glance, or disgusted expression, but Cristina just lets it wash over her ( ... )
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Alex is brutal. He's honest and relatively tactless when he allows himself to be. He often does it with Meredith and, knowing the way Cristina is, he would probably do it with her. That line was very bitter and i deleted it a couple of times before I just decided to let the story write itself.
Meredith does think she is the worst off doesn't she? She's a bit of a drama queen IMO (I like the character, I'm just stating my views). These two however are probably the most broken of the bunch, and certainly the coldest. I think they could find common ground with each other.
I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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And yeah, Mer, I love. But I do find myself thinking "Okay, we get it. You're tragic." but Shonda does tend to beat us over the head with Meredith being the worst-off. For me, Alex and Cristina are the ones so embedded in their broken-ness that it'd be hard to change them- I find them the most fascinating, to be that broken and still believe that they're fine. And to me, that coldness makes them kind of vulnerable, in the strangest way. haha.
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I guess it's because she's the main character, we're supposed to sympathize with her, etc, but Shonda...does it wrong. There are other things she could focus on, other characters with much deeper issues.
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I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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I could go on and on and spam up your LJ saying how perfectly in character and quintessentially Alex and Cristina this was, but I'll just leave it at my favorite little detail; that Cristina drank straight from the bottle, and though Alex protested, they both knew he really didn't care. I'm not sure why I thought that was so poignant, but there you go.
Fantastic job.
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I'm really glad you liked this (that detail with the drinking...well I put some thought into that one)! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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I've been MIA lots of chaos over the summer!
Glad I found this, somedays I think that all the GOOD fanfic writers have been kidnapped!
At least I know you got loose!! H Ha
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