pause button {jack, sawyer} (for siluria)

[slybrunette]

Title: Pause Button
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Sawyer.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,006
Author's Note: Queen siluria wanted storms. I haven't written this kind of Lost in a while so I'm out of practice.
Summary: Set early Season 1. The first time the rain lasts for longer than an hour people start getting antsy. Another two hours and they

Comments

[emiliglia]

I miss the dynamics from S1 that you wrote so well here - Jack, the hero, and Sawyer, the antagonist but only in the sense that he can't get behind the hope that Jack's trying to make sure the survivors don't lose. Well done!

[slybrunette]

I miss that dynamic as well; watching now kind of makes me sad because we don't have that anymore.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[zelda_zee]

This is so spot-on in terms of their dynamic. I really like the way they relate to each other in this fic.

[haldoor]

I love that despite how wonderful everyone else thinks jack is, sawyer is the only one to question how Jack is while he's out there getting wet.

All of this makes so much sense, and that dynamic between them is really so much like we used to see on the show! ;-)