Comments | slybrunette: just to stay like this in the dim half-light dawn {derek/meredith}

slybrunette

just to stay like this in the dim half-light dawn {derek/meredith}

May 05, 2009 11:58

Title: Just To Stay Like This In The Dim Half-Light Dawn
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Derek/Meredith
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 612
Prompt: Written for _takemeaway_ for the Alphabet meme (b is for breakfast). I'm sorry this is so short, but I had an idea and I don't like writing words just for the sake of them.
Author's Note: This is a new trick ( Read more... )

ship: ga: derek/meredith, character: ga: derek, fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic, character: ga: meredith

Comments 24

starseed4 May 5 2009, 21:20:35 UTC

Miracles, indeed! There was no angst in this! :P And still, despite it being happy and cute, it wasn't so overwhelmingly fluffy that it became unbelievable. It was just very subtle and very real. Beautiful job with this. :)

slybrunette May 8 2009, 21:46:21 UTC

I know, no angst, how did that happen, lol. But yeah, it's not too fluffy if it's realistic. I don't mind happy when it's plausible.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

clockwork_jo May 5 2009, 21:28:32 UTC

Perfectly in character, and I love the way it's written- giving a weird fascinating quality to these everyday things, like the buttons on her shirt. It's kind of inconsequential details that seem like nothing and then add up to actually a pretty big something- which is just the feeling of normality. ^_^ Ugh. Loved it.

slybrunette May 10 2009, 16:58:54 UTC

This wasn't supposed to be as much about the little details, but that's kind of the way it came out, and I almost like it more for that. You can blame it on the music I was listening to at the time -- it changed this from a humor-based piece to something more...atmospheric.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

candylandgal May 5 2009, 23:06:11 UTC

Beautiful! If only more of us were moved to realize in the moment that there is extraordinary in the ordinary and not take a single second of anything that runs so deep for granted---I loved this! It speaks of them -so- well! :)

slybrunette May 10 2009, 16:59:41 UTC

It is about the moments, and the present. People are far too focused on the past or the future, but it would be nice to stop every once in awhile, you know.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xxelliexox May 5 2009, 23:44:56 UTC

I loved it!!

slybrunette May 10 2009, 17:00:30 UTC

I'm glad! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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slybrunette May 10 2009, 17:04:42 UTC

I like the little moments. If they weren't so drama filled and...well everything that Shonda has been doing with them for quite a while now, I think I might actually like them. Which is why I can write stuff like this and even enjoy doing it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing! And good luck with school hun!