it's in our family tree {jack/claire}

Apr 22, 2009 13:17

Title: It's In Our Family Tree
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Claire, although this is more character-centric than pairing-centric.
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,618
Prompt: Written for crickets as part of the Alphabet meme (r is for roots). Also using it for #20 - Reflection at philosophy_20
Author's Note: Even I think this is weird. And I wrote the damn thing.
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ship: lost: jack/claire, character: lost: claire, flist: kc owns my soul, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: jack, table: philosophy_20

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emiliglia April 22 2009, 18:06:39 UTC
This was incredible. I loved the pacing, the flashes of scenes, the acknowledgment of Claire actually missing Aaron. Amazing!

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slybrunette April 22 2009, 18:41:37 UTC
Well, to be fair we haven't seen Claire so we can't tell if the show's going to ignore that (they pretty much have ignored him though, lately, but considering their Kate/Aaron storyline I don't mind), but, you know, it's likely. And regarding the pacing, I was more than a little nervous about that, so I'm glad it worked for you.

I'm happy you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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30_rock_office April 22 2009, 20:50:42 UTC
I really liked this piece because it lets me know that someone else cares about the whereabouts of Claire. And where the heck are Rose and Bernard? That's another thing that's driving me crazy! Anyway, I think this great! :D

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slybrunette April 22 2009, 20:52:58 UTC
Believe me, there are a quiet a few of us who care. And as for Rose and Bernard, I hope we get some answers by the end of the season.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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gigglemonster April 22 2009, 22:56:56 UTC
Oohh this is beautiful dear :)
I love the whole connection theme, Claire feeling like she's been there before and feeling tied to the island and them to each other. That whole last paragraph is awesome.
I ♥ it!

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slybrunette April 25 2009, 15:01:09 UTC
For some reason I read the prompt 'roots' as like a connection to something, to each other, to the island. I never realized how much it would make this more about them as individual characters, instead of the ship.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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crickets April 23 2009, 01:16:10 UTC
So I read this at work but had no time to comment. I want you to know that I love this, that you've still got it, and I love this so much for the sheer fact that you handled this relationship in a way that I love and that you fit it in the canon world of the show. You do that so well. It's beautiful and THANK YOU. Made my day, really.

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slybrunette April 25 2009, 15:02:07 UTC
I told you, sometimes being so anal about canon is a good thing. Because then these fics happen and it's not totally weird right?

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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crickets April 25 2009, 15:13:27 UTC
It's never weird. ;)

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zelda_zee April 23 2009, 19:13:53 UTC
This is wonderful. I really loved it!

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slybrunette April 25 2009, 15:02:54 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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