today you were far away {jack, sawyer}

Apr 18, 2009 17:11

Title: Today You Were Far Away
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Sawyer (shippery if you squint). There are references to Sawyer/Juliet, Jack/Kate, Sawyer/Kate, but none of them really play any part in this.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,481
Author's Note: Don't worry, I don't still write Lost, this was just a fluke, lol.
Summary: Spoilers for ( Read more... )

character: lost: sawyer, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: jack

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angela_weber April 18 2009, 21:54:32 UTC
I love this! Your Sawyer voice is spot-on, and I have such a soft spot for his interactions with Jack, especially now that their dynamic has changed, and you captured that wonderfully. The first paragraph in particular is perfect. Really great work!

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slybrunette April 19 2009, 16:30:48 UTC
I used to have such a love for these two, but lately I've had a bit of trouble understanding the two of them with canon and all. This was a sort of attempt to make sense of it all, so I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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liljan98 April 18 2009, 22:58:56 UTC
This was great! I enjoy the role reversal on the show, but you've told it from a different angle and I enjoyed that very much too. I love the idea of Sawyer missing Jack's companionship :-)

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slybrunette April 19 2009, 16:31:52 UTC
I have a lot of trouble with the role reversal actually, which may be why I came at it from a different angle -- my way of rationalizing it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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slybrunette April 19 2009, 16:34:48 UTC
To be completely honest I can't read it either. Up until two days ago, I also couldn't bring myself to write it.

Lost is messed up. The characters, the show, this we know, and that's really why I stopped writing in the first place -- kind of ironic that now I've gone back and started again, albeit briefly, because of the same reason.

Also, I think you made me tear up a little at that last -- sometimes I really do miss this fandom, and wish I could come back to it. And then writing this, I remember why I just can't. I don't feel like I know these people like I used to.

I'm glad you liked this hun! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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crickets April 18 2009, 23:08:43 UTC
Aw, boys. Why can't they be pals? I loved this. The image of Sawyer watching Jack through the school windows especially for some reason. Very awesome and you should totally write this fandom more and I know, I know. Me too.

And what Lenina says, I just miss it.

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slybrunette April 19 2009, 16:40:50 UTC
I want their friendship back. More than I want the slash aspect, I want the companionship.

I wish I could write it more, you know, I really do, but I feel like every time I do it's half-assed. Maybe with time -- it's all a matter of getting back into the groove, right?

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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eponine119 April 19 2009, 19:06:58 UTC
Aw. I love this. I love them. Thank you for writing this!

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slybrunette April 19 2009, 19:10:12 UTC
Hee, thank you for reading it! I'm glad you liked it!

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