Comments | slybrunette: all the stars can disappear without a trace {jack, jack/sun}

slybrunette

all the stars can disappear without a trace {jack, jack/sun}

Mar 01, 2009 15:58

Title: All The Stars Can Disappear Without A Trace
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack. Mild Jack/Sun.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,183
Prompt: #28 - Winter for 100_tales
Author's Note: Even I'll admit this is a little weird, but I'm blaming it on the snow.
Summary: Spoilers for Season 5. At the time it seemed like the thing to do -- go back, leave again ( Read more... )

table: 100_tales, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: sun, character: lost: jack, ship: lost: jack/sun

Comments 13

crickets March 1 2009, 21:40:16 UTC

Wow I am in love with this premise. So awesome. And I love that Sun is there and that she reads in the winter and yay. This is awesome. Can you write more? LOL.

slybrunette March 1 2009, 21:42:07 UTC

I'm a bit in love with it too; I don't think I accomplished all I meant to though -- which leads one to believe I will either try very hard to forget I ever wrote it...or do a sequel. I have a feeling I know which one you're in favor of, but who knows. Maybe.

Thanks so much hun! You always make me feel a bit better about these things :)

gigglemonster March 1 2009, 22:04:52 UTC

Oooh this is really awesome dude!
I think this is actually a very believable situation to put them in! So dark and so..devoid of hope, it's very haunting. I dig it ;)
You rule

slybrunette March 1 2009, 22:08:27 UTC

I like doing bleak things. It fits my relationship with Lost atm. But my whole worry was that it wasn't going to be believable, so hearing that you thought it was is a great relief.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

missy_useless March 1 2009, 22:57:11 UTC

Woah, this is awesome. It's dark and hopeless and so original, and I love the Jack/Sun interaction. In addition to that, the whole concept is ingenious. Loved this; amazing work! :)

slybrunette March 2 2009, 02:35:46 UTC

Aw thank you! I've been absolutely dying to write something Jack/Sun lately, and this little scenario popped up in my head sometime last night and I knew I was onto something.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

falseeeyelashes March 2 2009, 04:33:39 UTC

This is fantastic. The bleak landscape you paint here is incredible, and the scenario! I am really a fan of this scenario. I felt that the conversation between Jack and Sawyer about Kate was really, really well-done, and Sun. Oh, Sun. Perfect. Jack/Sun is definitely one of those ships that I secretly love, *laughs*

Thanks for this! I really enjoyed reading :D

slybrunette March 2 2009, 04:36:26 UTC

The more I think about it and it's possibilities the more I am also very much a fan of this kind of thing. If only because it makes my secret Jack/Sun crack!ship so much more valid.

I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

weehobbit March 2 2009, 20:34:09 UTC

I like the melancholic feel of this. How Jack can't fix it no matter what (poor bb D:). Getting everyone off the island doesn't make it all better. How in a way, maybe they've always been lost, before during after the island.

slybrunette March 2 2009, 20:36:21 UTC

Yeah, it is kind of...depressing I guess, in a way, how this isn't something fixable, how messed up they've always been. But at the same time angst is always fun to write.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!