we forgot to fall apart {alex/addison}

[slybrunette]

Title: We Forgot To Fall Apart
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Alex/Addison
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,000
Prompt: #43 - Sun for writing_rainbow
Author's Note: Inspired by last episode, a few fics from various places and...god I wish I knew. I didn't even write them when they were still canon.
Summary: Spoilers for 4.16, then vague spec. There are the

Comments

[mad_carrie]

You've made my crappy week. Thank you, really. &hearts

So them.

he thinks about kissing her, about that one second before their lips touch where her eyes slip closed and her hands make a grab for him, digging into his shoulder or his back, really whatever she can get her hands on easiest

I love that description. You're fab with little details like that.

Again, thank you! &hearts

[slybrunette]

Aw I'm glad to hear it! And sorry about your crappy week *hugs*

It was fun playing with these two -- strange that I hadn't before. I'm happy you enjoyed it; thanks for reading and reviewing!

[falsemurmur]

You don't know how long it's been since I read Addie/Alex, which is shame b/c I love them above no other. Anyway...I'm so, so glad to have read this. You've got Alex down pat, and your imagery is just...amazing, & I truly admire the talent you have for that.

Come here, get a change in scenery, forget himself for a while in Addison because, hey, it’s not like she really seemed to mind; he’s not wrecking any homes or breaking any hearts in her life and that’s what makes this all okay.

Um. YES. Beautiful. I love these two but they always break my heart, & you captured that perfectly in that line. Thank you for writing this.

[slybrunette]

I often don't reading my favorites as much as I'd like so I totally understand that unfortunately. It's nice to delve back in to them every now and then.

I hear a lot more about my dialogue than I do about my imagery with Grey's, so hearing that makes me feel a LOT better.

I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[clockwork_jo]

I don't usually read Alex or Addison fics, so this was totally different-- But I love the way you write so I'll give anything a go!! Haha.

There is something so fabulous in the beautifully mundane (that's the only way I can describe them) details you include that just make me happy: the final paragraph is an excellent example of that. It is always a pleasure to read you're writing, and this was no exception. Really amazing.

[slybrunette]

I don't really write Addison anymore -- Alex on the other hand I write way TOO much, lol. I like including random, mundane stuff, since I think it gives you more of a personal feel for the story, instead of just telling what's happening, it's more like showing.

I'm glad you took a chance on this and liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[slybrunette]

lol, that would certainly be an interesting turn of events.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[cinnamonstreet]

Oh I love these two sfm!! Thank you for wrote about them! Grat job!