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harvardbarbie November 30 2008, 21:46:02 UTC
OH, ALEX/IZZIE. YOU BREAK MY HEART.

I love your writing style. I fail at commenting your fics/drabbles a lot because I'm a slow reader/reviewer (I always like picking apart fics line by line) and school hates me, BUT. You are an amaaaaazing writer. ♥

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slybrunette November 30 2008, 21:47:42 UTC
Aw, thank you hun! I am a slow reviewer too -- usually I just end up dropping a short line or two as a comment so people know -- so I totally understand, and thank you so much for stopping by to read this :)

I'm glad you liked it!

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crickets November 30 2008, 22:01:16 UTC
(He gives her purpose, in some sick way, and she has been stripped of everything else, she can’t lose that too - even if that means she needs him to walk back down those stairs; it’s a weakness he won’t see for what it is and that’s the only thing that will keep her warm tonight). - I love this line. I love this and them. Just another on a long list of fucked up ships that I can't get enough of.

That Alex/Izzie is a great way of explaining the way he's been acting. And it may just be true. Aww.

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slybrunette November 30 2008, 22:14:31 UTC
If it hadn't been for you I wouldn't have written or posted. That fic still terrifies me, but I'll get over it.

Alex does blame himself for a lot of things, treats them as failures on his part, and then he clams up. Clearly that hasn't worked for him in the past so I think he's just trying something different now, not sure.

I'm glad you liked these hun! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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gigglemonster November 30 2008, 22:20:50 UTC
Gah that Kara/Leoben is wonderful! Perfect Kara voice and that last line is just perfect!

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slybrunette November 30 2008, 22:22:41 UTC
Seriously? Dude, I didn't know what to think with it -- I haven't read all that much BSG, much less written it. But I'm really glad you like it -- you and KC make me feel a helluva lot better about it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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cynthia_arrow November 30 2008, 22:26:15 UTC
Nice look at that slice of Kara's life and her relationship with Leoben. I like the last paragraph especially. I can never find it in me to dig into that side of her (which is why I can't write Kara/Leoben), but I always like reading it when someone else can. Well done.

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slybrunette November 30 2008, 22:28:25 UTC
I have never even attempted writing Kara before, much less this ship, so everything you just said meant so much to me you don't even know. I've been beyond unsure with this little ficlet.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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sparklepop777 November 30 2008, 22:39:42 UTC
Alex and Izzie break my heart right now. :(

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slybrunette November 30 2008, 22:40:44 UTC
Ditto on that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing hun!

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