(Untitled)

[slybrunette]

Title: Goodnight Goodnight
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sawyer, Clementine | Kate/Sawyer, Clementine/Aaron
Word Count: 797
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #71 - Lies for 100_tales
Author's Note: Completely AU. And I took a few liberties with ages as well.
Summary: Future fic. "Don't you think you're a little old for this?" Her voice sounds like a siren amid

Comments

[bebitched]

So this is the fic you thought was too weird? You're wrong. I really really really REALLY love this. A lot (wasn't sure that came across with the 4 really's).

“We tell lies and keep secrets because they’re your lies and your secrets and you’ve kept them alive so long that we inherited them.”
Beautiful and heartbreaking, but then again so is the whole fic.

I want Clementine to be like this. Honest and wise in the way that young people are, not from experience but through having a clear perspective untainted by life and excuses.

This fic is a perfectly tangled web, what with Kate and Sawyer then Clementine (which I almost want to shorten to Clem but that would be just so wrong) and Aaron, perfectly summed up with “You know Aaron still doesn’t know you’re my dad. Or even that she isn’t his mother..." and I love it.

Great work here!

[slybrunette]

Yeah, this is the weird 'wtf' fic.

I hope we see Clementine (and yeah, I almost shortened it a few times too) but even if we do we aren't going to get her at this age -- even if we did she probably would be like this.

I'm really thrilled that you didn't think I was crazy with this. I happen to kind of like it now that I look at it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[bebitched]

Well I added it to my memories so... no, I think it's safe to say I don't think you're crazy. Or rather, crazy in the best way possible.

[slybrunette]

Hee, yayz!

[gottalovev]

I love this glimpse at a relationship, or lack of there of, between Clementine and Sawyer. parent/kid communications are never really easy but I can imagine how fucked up it would be for them. she was awesomely fleshed out :)

[slybrunette]

At that age? Yeah, they're never easy, and these two? That would be unimaginable (I guess except for where I just wrote it, lol).

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

[aboutbunnies]

Wow, I loved this. It's harsh and heartbreaking, but so beautiful. I love Clementine's character here; you've developed her so well. The contrasts made between Kate and Sawyer's relationship and Clementine and Aaron's are great, too. Thanks for sharing this!

[slybrunette]

Clementine interests me, I don't know why, but I have this...stiff image of her in my head that just refuses to go away. I'm just glad you think she's developed well enough.

I'm thrilled that you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!