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[slybrunette]

Title: Counting Down To Zero
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Michael, various others.
Word Count: 815
Rating: PG-13
Author's Note: Late birthday fic for toestastegood.
Spoilers: Up to "There's No Place Like Home Pt. 2"
Summary: The ship smells like old mop water, spilled beer, and something strong he can't quite identify. It makes him think

Comments

[slybrunette]

Aw, you are too sweet.

I actually think I kind of...I didn't know, I think I could've done better but just didn't have the muse's cooperation.

Here's the good thing: I miss writing Michael and you give me a reason to. And I remember the Michael/Ana thing from last year -- I figured you'd be pleased with that. As well as the Michael and Jin friendship thing.

I'm really thrilled that you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing hun!

[bebitched]

I love it when you do fics in this style (not that I don't enjoy the others; these just particularly sing), especially with the more forgotten characters. Ana Lucia would come see him, it makes sense, just like Libby. Only I think I would have enjoyed AL more for some reason. I found these lines especially interesting:

She disappears before he can find the words for ‘what do you want’, put them in the correct order to make sense, and he thinks he already knows she’ll be back.

The ship smells of gunpowder, everywhere - he thinks he understands why now.
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Just you and me, her voice tells him, and he thinks it’s meant to soothe.

Well done!

[slybrunette]

This style happens when I don't have a clue what to right -- it allows me to be vague, so it was a happy accident.

I'm glad you liked this hun! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[siluria]

Well done you for tackling Michael in those S4 moments, not many people write him, but you've done an awesome job with this. I love the ending especially.

[slybrunette]

I tend to write Michael a lot these days (for some inane reason) but I hadn't yet messed with him much towards the end of S4 so I thought it was time. It's nice to hear I handled it well :)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!